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[POEM]The Hum of Destiny

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This is my first poem that I have put u on the MT forum. It's kinda long, but enjoy it for all it's worth. And to tell a story, I was inpsired to write this from the sound of my computer fan buzzing away.

This is one that I posted up in Poetry Corner. So I'd like to share it with those that aren't in that group. So again, enjoy!


The Hum of Destiny

I hear that hum,
that sweet hum,
the sound of that which brings me.

The sound that brings me,
as though I am right next to you,
that wonderful hum.

The sweet sound of you,
the sound that overcomes all,
no matter how soft it is spoken.

I wait by this hum,
waiting for it to be silenced by you,
an your voice so clear as a bell.

Every word a beautiful measure,
in the word's most beautiful song.

Every conversation,
is a meaningful as that symphony,
which you love,
so very much.

Your laugh,
the high point of my days.

Your tear,
the saddest,
darkest days I could know.

Your smile,
as warm as the sunshine,
in the middle of spring,
burns through the ice,
surrounding my heart.

Your words,
like echoing thunder,
in my ears.

This hum,
that which bring you closer to me,
that which makes time and space stand aside,
so that we may be together.

That hum,
only a temporary meeting.

And then as gracefully as you come,
you disappear into the night,
you words still echoing,
and your voice still singing to me.

And we are separated,
Only to meet again,
some other time,
and some other place,
we are destined to meet again.

Its very sweet..and loving^.^.....this is perhaps the one single poem i've enjoyed being posted on mt^.^

GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

Wow. That is totally deep. I like it a lot. Keep up the great work!

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maverickmechanic

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Absurd Insanity

nice. good work.

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AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

I know I read this last night, but again, it is very beautiful. ^_^ Reading it again, it kind of sounds like something Syaoran would write for Sakura. :) Lovely poem. ^_^

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xcf33

xcf33

Sakura forever

Wow you are very talented indeed ^_^ MT should expand the catagory of art lol I think it's a great one considering your age it's very simplistic yet beautiful, it's soft yet very objective, I like it much hope to hear more from you :)


Collinxx

Collinxx

Destiny

this is a good tale. lolLLL hehe! yeah!
:) :) :)

cherrybombgurl

cherrybombgurl

Daisuki ^w^

good job . keep up the good work :)

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~Sayonara ^_^

Thank you all so very much for your compliments and encouragement. I will post the new poems as I write.

Until then, I bid thee ado.

xange

xange

~white bunny~

I like your poems, this one is loving and full of sentiment but not leaving the coolness of a true man...lol my comments are sometimes to transparent, but at least im sincere :)

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