Warning: Undefined array key "HTTP_ACCEPT_LANGUAGE" in /var/www/minitokyo/www/includes/common.inc.php on line 360 [POEM] Ballad of Self - Minitokyo

[POEM] Ballad of Self

page 1 of 1 12 total items

Here is another of my poems. So please enjoy.

I hope not to disappoint those that loved "The Hum of Destiny" with this one.

Ballad of Self

I find myself,
A lonely man,
but I don't care.

I found myself lonely,
I did not care,
but I met you.

I feel now,
that sadness,
only to see you in my eye.

To ask why,
I can not,
this feeling,
so very alien.

I confront you,
and try to say these feelings to you,
"ariwa...ariwa..."
but I never finish.

So the loneliness,
slowly leaves,
each time I see you.

But it is when I don't see you that I despair,
so my heart,
hides in the dark,
waiting,
waiting,
waiting...

cherrybombgurl

cherrybombgurl

Daisuki ^w^

that was a great poem yet another job well done hope to hear more of your poems

Signature Image
~Sayonara ^_^

Collinxx

Collinxx

Destiny

NIce poem, but I wonder you have image...... is better than just a reading,,,


Lover, Collinxx

Thank you all for the compliments. I am glad to hear that you all enjoyed it.

GearStalker05

GearStalker05

En Memoria

Yet another excellent piece of work, my friend. You have a real talent when it comes to poetry. I can't wait to see what you come up with next.

Signature Image
You got what you wanted...but you got what you hate...

Yureika

Yureika

[.: L!ve tHe FulLe$t :.]

yeah....
nice and simple..good job well done!!!!!

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

I have also already told you on this one as well, that this is very well written too. You do seem to have a gift for writing. Keep it up. ^_^

Signature
	Image
Not really walling much anymore D: Feel free to browse my gallery, though!
Thank you for the siggy and avy, Kitten! ^_^

I will.

Shkira

Shkira

Cake!!

I like this one. Telling a story of sorts. And the punctuation this time around helped! ~_^

xange

xange

~white bunny~

Again i must say your poems are great .

she'll **** you just for the taste


Signature
	Image

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

-repeat-

I am sorry to be evil, but I did not like this one. It does not seem so well written as to say it is good, but that is a mere opinion from a minion of scrutiny. This by no means for you to give up, it just means I missed that essential piece that maybe you intended to illustrate in your writing.

-repeat-

Well, that's understandable. Not everyone will like all of my poems that I write. So, at least you read it. And I thank you for doing at least that much.

Though this poem was one I wrote as a matter of feeling, and I guess that not all can associate with it. But again, thanks for taking the time to read it.

page 1 of 1 12 total items

Back to Off-topic Discussions | Active Threads | Forum Index

Only members can post replies, please register.

Warning: Undefined array key "cookienotice" in /var/www/minitokyo/www/html2/footer.html on line 73
This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse the site you are agreeing to our use of cookies. Read more.