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dezidez

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Hey every one......hope you dont mind......heres the rules.....you must decide.....My job write a few..... with puzzles....woundering.....theres clifhanging too.....so come along come inside.....But hold on for the bumppy ride........I should come up with every day....
or try.....lol..feel free to add your own i dont mind.... this should be fun*wink*

heres my first poem...feel free to tell me what you think
Its called "wait":

I am patently waiting. Until I cant wait no more

But if I keep waiting . Im not really sure, Upon what I await

But I just sit upon a great big mountain full of waits

Until the time is finally right,so I can take my wantings

Its just wait

Should I beg,on my knees,or cry like a dog.

Curl up in some corner,or in a hole? Till you finally make up your mind?

No.I think not.I should just.Wait

Even though the anger is building up inside of me

I must say that it is hard.to swallow.down my pride

To say what I truly feel deep down inside.

BUT.I.STILL.wait!

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  • Aug 28, 2005

DoubleBarrel

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Nice poem.

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  • Aug 28, 2005

dezidez

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*blushing* thank you.....it was nothing really

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  • Aug 28, 2005

Beautiful5oul

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sounds romantic =)

You said we were all an accident,
with Accidents you'll never know,
What could have been.
But you you'll always be my favorite one.

  • Aug 28, 2005

EsunaMeggy

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Its so sweet. I love it. :)

Tragedy is when I cut my finger. Comedy is when you fall into an open sewer and die.
-Mel Brooks

  • Aug 28, 2005

DoubleBarrel

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could u make another poem, i would love to hear it. :)

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  • Aug 28, 2005

dezidez

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Quote by Beautiful5oulsounds romantic =)

Thanks.....both of you *smiles*

Quote by EsunaMeggyIts so sweet. I love it. :)

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  • Aug 28, 2005

sjolley

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I have to say that this is a very interesting piece... I am rarely intrigued by writing, but this is very interesting. I like the form of the poem, as in, I like that it doesn't all rhyme. It was harder to read because of the exclamations (if you go back after copying and pasting and add in the ' " etc. yourself then it won't do that. But I really do like the piece and I hope to see more. :D

Why do you kill the joy of death?

  • Aug 28, 2005

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Quote by sjolleyI have to say that this is a very interesting piece... I am rarely intrigued by writing, but this is very interesting. I like the form of the poem, as in, I like that it doesn't all rhyme. It was harder to read because of the exclamations (if you go back after copying and pasting and add in the ' " etc. yourself then it won't do that. But I really do like the piece and I hope to see more. :D

oh of course.....*shaking head* i'll be writing more......i love to write poems......one way to get off fustration...lol....*smile*.....i'm just glad everyone enjoys... :D :D

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  • Aug 28, 2005

sjolley

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Quote by dezidez

Quote by sjolleyI have to say that this is a very interesting piece... I am rarely intrigued by writing, but this is very interesting. I like the form of the poem, as in, I like that it doesn't all rhyme. It was harder to read because of the exclamations (if you go back after copying and pasting and add in the ' " etc. yourself then it won't do that. But I really do like the piece and I hope to see more. :D


oh of course.....*shaking head* i'll be writing more......i love to write poems......one way to get off fustration...lol....*smile*.....i'm just glad everyone enjoys... :D :D

I love writing too. lol It's my hobbie and it's part of my job. (editor and critiquor). I'm a very picky person when it comes to writing, so it's a compliment if I say anything about someones work *blushes* I'm sorry if that sounded mean.... lol :D

Why do you kill the joy of death?

  • Aug 28, 2005

dezidez

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lol/.......no worries......its all good...... ill still respect a mind......good or bad......its all good ;) ;)

Everyone feel free to show your work.......it no trouble at all.....lol ;)

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  • Aug 28, 2005

Akaiken

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Uh... can't understand some parts but to see the ones I understand, I think it's really romantic, hehehe!

I'll wait!

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pretty ^^

I'm still here. . . all thats left of yesterday. . .

  • Aug 29, 2005

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Quote by AkaikenUh... can't understand some parts but to see the ones I understand, I think it's really romantic, hehehe!
I'll wait!

Sorry if you cant see....I'll try by best to fix it..... and by the way thanks for posting.....feel free to show me some of your work... ;) ;)

Quote by Beccieboopretty ^^

Quote by DoubleBarrelcould u make another poem, i would love to hear it. :)

Thanks guys.......i'l write more......tomorrow.... XD ;)

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  • Aug 29, 2005
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its diferent to what I read till now... I kinda like Ur stile
I'll be back tomorrow
this should be fun ^_^

  • Aug 29, 2005

dezidez

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Wow...Thanks....it will be then everyone can diguess it.....point of views...I just glad everyone enjoys*laughing nurviously*

I thought no one would like it....lol....thanks though :D :D ;)


Quote by SaschaCits diferent to what I read till now... I kinda like Ur stile
I'll be back tomorrowthis should be fun ^_^

:d :D ;)

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  • Aug 29, 2005

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Love all poems includin this one^_^
Great job!

Thanx endoftheworld for the sig^_^
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You can call me Namie or Batrisha. May God Bless ya always!

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Well thanks.....AHEM......ATTENION...ALL twodays lucky a day.....For poem # 2 is now on the way....... :D :D :D :nerd: ;) .....please ENJOY*bows*

this one is called.....:"KID"......

You say what you mean; you mean what you say
Why did you say it would be that way?
You lied to me, but you didnt break my heart
I have to leave you alone, youre tearing me apart
Youre bitter like poison, cold as ice
You pricked my tongue with just one bite
Too many words,cant say how I feel
You pretend to comfort me, youre so unreal
I called out for you,you walked away
I just stand and watched you with nothing to say
And here I stay,believing in you
I cant believe what you tried to pull, the shit that you do
And then expect me not to be mad
You was part of my world in mind,turned out to be the worse part I had
Before, I seen you speak,
And to chase around other girls,am I a trick or treat?
Tried to be your friend, but you just walked away
Tried to make you mine, but here I stay
Alone, by myself, to try and wonder Why?
That time after time, I even try to try
To make it work,between you me
But I guess youre just another one that Wont be the 'One' for me
So just leave me alone, and when you see me
Just dont bother talking,like accustom,just let me be
Dont even try to deny,you know what you did
You will always and forever,be just some 'Kid'

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  • Aug 29, 2005

ZeroDegress

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NICE :D good poem dezi-channess good job eh you gots talent-o keep up the poem writing ness i gots faith in your ability :)

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  • Aug 29, 2005
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this second one I like too... the way U express Urself.
Ur really good at this, and one of the things that I can say that attracts my atention, is the way U mix the rimes, just few here and there, swee
I liked it better that yesterdays, keep it up.
*lights a cigarrete*
till tomorrow ^_^

  • Aug 30, 2005

dezidez

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Quote by SaschaCthis second one I like too... the way U express Urself.
Ur really good at this, and one of the things that I can say that attracts my atention, is the way U mix the rimes, just few here and there, swee
I liked it better that yesterdays, keep it up.*lights a cigarrete*
till tomorrow ^_^

*blushes....*....THANK you.......thank YOU...lol.....tomorrow shall come....

Quote by ZeroDegressNICE :D good poem dezi-channess good job eh you gots talent-o keep up the poem writing ness i gots faith in your ability :)

Thaks zero ......nice of you to drop by......Feel free to come back anytime....hehe.....

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  • Aug 30, 2005
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Dezi your great at writing poems. :) I'm sure peom after poem they'll all be great.

  • Aug 30, 2005

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Quote by AlishaDezi your great at writing poems. :) I'm sure peom after poem they'll all be great.

why....THANK YOU...Alisha......I am always glad to share....and dont be afraid to post some of your work or not......feel free to express yourself.....in my world......lol....;)

i am glad everyone enjoys...just meet back here for the meet poem.....untill tomorrow...friends...... :D :D :D :nerd: ;)

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  • Aug 30, 2005

winter

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wow excellent job
i luv it!
soo romantic
*pats dez on the back*

  • Aug 30, 2005

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