Poems are rough, kinda don't like em. Honestly, not refined, you know revised some words with closer attention. Maybe it's high expectations, those are my frustrations. ;P
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- Aug 30, 2005
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Yea it's great. Not to flatter, but it's good to confess your feelings. And again there's a lot of room for improvement. Poems are like the arts of language. So it's better if you don't implant words of curses. Learn from others (other poems), it'll help you a great deal.
- Aug 30, 2005
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Hey everyone......*smiles*......Time for my next poem......and aswell as I hope you enjoy.....^_^....:Called "confusion"
They say you dont learn a lesson, without going through pain
But is there not happiness? What a great deal, but in vain
My happiness is like or as a mirror, it shatters
The difference from them two, are only two crazy matters
One tall, one short, One with long hair, the other with his cut
You both make me happy. You both make me race
Back and forth until I am spinning, tangled in a web but still Im breathing
And when I am all alone, I know that I am not
For when I think, I think of them.both.a lot
I am not shy to say, but then again I am
For I had planned and wondered what to say, as yet felt like a sham
I am very sad, but then again Im not because I think of them both, I think of them a lot
I dream of them as well. As if I was a pirate, sailing across the sea
To seek for my most lost treasure and keep it all for me.
Both of them are sacred, like the lost city of gold
But the only difference is. One is the ruby of youth and the other, The pearl of old
I heard the saying before. 'Cant always get what you want'
But why dont I be greedy, and take them both for myself
As I laugh to myself and ponder this evil plot
I think about it, I think about them, I think of them, a lot
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wow :D niceness great job dezi [asusual] i told you better then me :( lol
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Quote by ZeroDegresswow :D niceness great job dezi [asusual] i told you better then me :( lol
Thanks zero.....as do you....lol.... :D ;) ;)
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I like it... I like it a lot ^_^
It gets better everyday... this looks promesing- Aug 30, 2005
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cool! i like it
dezidez, you rock! XDAno hi kimi ni sayonara sae iezu,
Soshite miushinatta yume mo..
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AWWW...thanks everyone....*jumping with joy*......i makes me feel real good....that everyone enjoys..... :D :D :nerd: ;) well.....until TOMORROW.....lol..... wink
Quote by SaschaCI like it... I like it a lot ^_^It gets better everyday... this looks promesing
*SMILES*.......Thankyou....thankyou....*bows*....:D :D ;) *blushing*
Quote by iiwacool! i like itdezidez, you rock! XD
Aww...*blushing*......NOO.....you guys ROCK.......it would not be possible...lol.....with out you guys......lol...... :D :D :nerd: ;) ;)
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Oooow! Dezi! Lovely poem! *dances for joy* Dezi always has great poems! But heres mine. I wrote it today once agian in math class -_-
Tell me why you act this way
I wish I knew what to sayForever lost at Heart
I wish I knew where to startYou told me that you trusted
You told me that you lovedBut when you left that day
All I wanted was a hugI miss those sweet kisses
But all I say now are wishesI wish you where back here
I wish you where mineI remember the first time when you sent chills down my spine
Come back to me my Love
Let me show you I care
I know what I did wasn't fairBut untill then I slowly wisper
I love you
I love you
I love youLet me show you I care
Well there you go... I know it isn't better then dezis but I tryed ^_^'- Aug 31, 2005
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wow it's really good I like it very much ;) thx
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Urs is also very preety alisha, but the last part of it made thing of this song... "these words (of my own)"
back to the poem!
I think is very soft and warm... beautifil workeveryday I like this thread a bit more ^_^
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Quote by AlishaOooow! Dezi! Lovely poem! *dances for joy* Dezi always has great poems! But heres mine. I wrote it today once agian in math class -_-
Well there you go... I know it isn't better then dezis but I tryed ^_^'WELL....THANK YOU.......ALISHA.....lol.....i love when people try....and I lov this poem..... :D :D ;) great effert.....especailly when done in MATH class......lol......your still cool..... :nerd: ;) ;)
Quote by Andulienwow it's really good I like it very much ;) thx
thanks....fo posting.....and remember....come on in tomorrow for the next peom
Quote by SaschaCUrs is also very preety alisha, but the last part of it made thing of this song... "these words (of my own)"
back to the poem!I think is very soft and warm... beautifil work
everyday I like this thread a bit more ^_^lol......ya.....a little...but its all goodism.....lol..... :D :D ;)
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i think you did a great job on the poem. keep up the good work so much emotion nicely done
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HEY....everyone.....#4poem on the go....hehe...T_T corny....lol.....anyway..ahem.....this net poem may be shrot so you guys ar real lucky ......you get two in one day.....so here it goes.... lol....PLEASE ENJOY.....*bows* :D :D :nerd: ;)
Cant you UNDERSTAND....
What did i do... i dont understand
Anger has overcome me...raptuered me and took me by the hand
i dont comprehended... as for you...you dont forgive
How many times must i say it
well...its too late ....it no longer livesWhat does that mean ...your raptuer...your trust...isnt it due
My hellos,my sorrys, my love...all my love
they all mean nothing to youIm lost in myself....my mind...my tears...
I brought out my worst, I bought and shouted out my fears..
Does it really matter ... what you think of me
I know you think im nothing....and thats all i'll ever be
cuz sorry is just not enough for you...POEM....2....ENJOY :D :D :D :nerd: ;)
Reflections
I never look in the mirror...to describe myself....I am always happy ...with what I see....
But just today of all days....it just doesnt seem to be
I am no longer alive....I am very well dead...afloat...underneith the ocean...lost...and I can see
I look at my reflection...but dont recorgnize my identity....My soul...has bin stolen...Its me.... then again its not
when I look into that mirror....that splitting image of me....is a nothingness deminor...
an emptyness of space...
For once my heart was happy, with much grace..For now...my heart has turned real cold... as i feel ...no emotion....I am heartless...I can not turn away...I as am lost in a adrift.... rapped up in darkness... It drank my blood...
For I had changed...
What could this be....for this I am lost...cursed...and scaredfor life...bound from the depths...
This is the fight between good and evil and it could no longer with hold..for i had sufferedBlood pours from my eyes which is and had been my remedy...my hunger for more...
I have chocies....to move on or to be tided down
I must choose for I....for I am bound....frozen....deep inside
until..... you call my name.....I am ....saved...Ok.....thats it .....tell me WHAt YUO think.....yea......^_^ XD XD :nerd: ;)
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Dezi those are great poems! I always enjoy reading yours. :) I can relate to them both. But here's mine. It wasn't finished in math class though. I didn't have enough time... But someone help me! I'm in a habbit of writing love poems... -_-
i feel horrible terrible
How could I let you go?
Without letting you knowI regret never telling
All the secrets I hid
But yet now I bidI bid for your return
I can’t help but to concernI miss your love when you’re away
And I know now that I can’t stayI must tell you somehow
That I’ve been holding onto something until nowWhen you come back to me one day
Then I will tell you what I want to sayBut until then I wait silently
While I question quietlyWhat would have happened if you weren’t away?
All I have to say isi miss you I love you
Oh why can’t you stay?
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Quote by AlishaDezi those are great poems! I always enjoy reading yours. :) I can relate to them both. But here's mine. It wasn't finished in math class though. I didn't have enough time... But someone help me! I'm in a habbit of writing love poems... -_-
And once again....AWWWWWW.....lol.....Thank you very much for sharing your lovely poem......its really great.....and I thank you all for loving other poeples thoughts....soul and hearts dedicated....in their poems....it means alot......(mushy moment) <_<... :nya: :D :nerd: ;)
thanks ALL FOR posting..... :D :D :nerd: ;) Untill tomorrow ....you lucky people.....lol.... ;) ;) ;)
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Feel The Love Of the Father of the Spirits on the Wind flowing throught your face
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Quote by escastreamFeel The Love Of the Father of the Spirits on the Wind flowing throught your face
NICE.....i like.....real smooth.....*snaps fingers....*....lol...Thanks for posting... :D :D ;)
Quote by BlkLotusi think you did a great job on the poem. keep up the good work so much emotion nicely done
until tomorrow.....me public.....untill tomorrow....haha.... :D ;) ;) ;)
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- Sep 01, 2005
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No new poems from me right now. I'm to tired from school. T_T Escastream that was a nice poem. It means a lot even though the poems not to long. Good job. :)
- Sep 02, 2005
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i will post mine tomorrow can i add u to my bl? lol
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usually i hate waiting meow. but since u put it that way. now i`m gonna enjoy it!!! lol
my user page made by k1ru ^^
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Thanks guys for posting.....cuz with out you it would not be possible..... ;) ;) ;) ...moving on...POEM TIME......
this is one of my new ones....Ummm and it is a love peom...heh...PLease Enjoy it.....:
Where are you, where did you go
how long will you stay, you should let me know
your presence around me makes me shiver
oh have i long for you my desire within me
One touch from your hand,one kiss from your lips...
as you mold my destiny with your finger tips
you make me wonder,Who do I trust
Is it you or another, for I longer to must
to have you by my side now and foreverAs you explore my wantings with your mind, soul, and heart
It is you that i long for all along, and it tears me apart
down in memories....memories that I wish to hide
but when were together theirs strong feelings inside
You eyes of ice blue, mine honey brown
our love lasts long cuz it is you that ive foundHaving these feelings, wonders ans urges
you comfort now and settle me down
I long for you, I live for you
My lust for you.....in trust tided now
We are bonded as one
youll never leave ...youll stay by my side
My protector....my saviour...my lover ...my life...well PLEASe enjoy this loving poem.....thanks untill tomorrow...hehe.... :D :D ;) i think i did it again...hehe...lol.....laterz...
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- Sep 02, 2005
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Awww... Dezi that's such a sweet poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :) I can't wait to read your next one!
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NICE that poem was beautiful, maybe you should be a poet. :D Make another ok i cant wait to here it.
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