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I'm not exactly a poem writer but i wrote this

Teenager

In this state i grew up,In this stage i try to understand the world
I start growing little wings to fly high up in the sky
Higher than the birds a little higher than the clouds
I start weaving dreams for my future,
Sometimes i imagine my self curing the sick people,
Sometimes wearing a black coat fightting for truth and sometimes giving autographs to a crowd
There is a great change in me,I can feel it,I can even see it in my reflection
My emotions for my friends grow stronger while the childish behaviour I had is slowly deacreasing
There are changes in my room,
The shelves which were full of dolls and toys,
Are now filled with music systems and thick novels.
Slowly unknowingly the little girl who lived in me vanishes,
A young lady with mature thoughts comes in.
She says that she needs her own identity and personality in this society.
My precious moments of life is a part of teenage
I would always like to remain a teenager but to face the reality
I can't stop time,no one can,everyone at least has to be destiny's child
And I am glad that right now I am,I am just a teenager.
But I'll not watse my golden age by just have fun and fooling around
I am sure that i'll achieve something unique while i am in this stage.

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.:. NAMIE .:.

Hey its great!

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89757

Welcome to everyone!!!

Hei !!! You wrote your poem greatly.I like it.How amazing you are!!! Keep it up !!!WHY???
Because I will support you!!!

Hei !!! NICE TO MEET YOU AND GOOD TO SEE YOU !!! Hope you have wonderful days everyday

Emeralis

Emeralis

Self proclaimed Sugar Monster

This poem is fantastic, and it's true. The little girl vanishes and a young lady comes in. It's all so true :)

Great poem.

Oh and thanks soooooooooo much for the signature image, I love it. :D

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amrisha

youkai~slayer

fantastic . the poem is really very true . "She says that she needs her own identity and personality in this society." this line has been well said keep it up :)

KawaiiCardcaptorSakura

KawaiiCardcaptorSakura

~ Hyuu Hyuu ~ ^^

It's all soooooo true! :) Keep it up girl! :D

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AngelXXX

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Wow!!!! What do you mean that you are not a good peom writer!!! Your doing great!!! Keepp it up!!!! :) :) :)

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Good poem. You have some talent.
You really should continue poem writing. :)

inuyasha-hanyou7

inuyasha-hanyou7

~Dark Demon~

Nice poem, hope to hear more!^^

trinigirl524

trinigirl524

WeST iNDee

aww thats so true,
eh not a poem writer? you seem really good at it though
anyways very nice poem cherryblossomsakura!

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nice poem really thoughtful.....

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

wow that is lovely. very heart felt and true

Yue-Horrishino

Yue-Horrishino

Tsubasa Mahou

You should write more poems, because it's is fantastic..........
Hopping to see more of you...

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LadyKitana

LadyKitana

Princess K

that really moved me :) it was sweet :) your a great writer! T_T

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IcyFyre

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aw! o wow! thats so beautiful and in some cases true! :D very beautiful! i like it a lot! you are talented at writing poems. it must have come naturally! :D

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LucyXlostangelwings

LucyXlostangelwings

Tomorrow's Way~

Very well captured!
I, as a teenager, can totally relate to that. :)
a great piece of work! ^^

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shulienne

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sakura-chan it seems you can do almost anything. :D

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thank you so much sakura-chan for my lovely yue!


jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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Watch out Cherryblossomsakura, you might become that which you hate, an over-smart person.


For your age, it's great that you write and express yourself. Release the feelings, don't let them be trapped in a bottle.

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