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[POEM] : Friend

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Beccieboo

H e l l o . . .

this a poem called friend, for me it's about my best friend but for you guys it can be about anything you want ^^ well here it is :

Fr iend:

When I'm with you I'm happy,
When I'm with you it's fun,
When we spend our time lounging,
And playing in the sun.

When I'm gone I miss you,
When your sad ,so am I,
Your eyes are really beauiful,
Just like the big blue sky.

We've been through many hardships,
But we stayed together 'till the end,
I will say this more than once,
You are my bestest friend!

i know that besetest is not a word but, o well!
Please tell me what you think ^^

I'm still here. . . all thats left of yesterday. . .

xange

xange

~white bunny~

I think it rocks i like it, keep it up friend ^^

she'll **** you just for the taste


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preksha0

finally got one..

Nice title, it explains it all
good job and keep it up

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animefairy

animefairy

Bored student

wow... it shows a lot of emotions to your friend! i hope you he/she will get to see you again!! thanks for sharing your poems with us!! ^.~

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marauder09

marauder09

Cruisin around the world

Good poem^^ Hope to see more of your poems soon. I'll see you later then. *waves*

"I need the sunshine of your heavenly eyes, after the day's great sun. And if i had a rose for every time i thought of you, I'd walk through a garden forever" Secret quote Signature Image

kauriswings

kauriswings

skrzydla jej serce

i like it... alot! it is heart warming kind of.

I'll never forget the day you told me you loved me,
i will always try to forget the day that you said you didn't love me...

Beccieboo

H e l l o . . .

yay!! thanks for all your comments ^^ i can show it to my friend sunday, thats when i'll back home in good old england. school starts next wekk noooo! XP

I'm still here. . . all thats left of yesterday. . .

AngelKate

AngelKate

~*Lady Sweetness*~

Aww, that's really cute. ^_^ I'm sure your friend will like it. :) Nice work. ^_^

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Sakura0chan

Sakura0chan

Nihongo o naraitai

It's so nice. ^^ I really like this one. ^^ I miss my two best friends!! XD
I'm sure that your friend will be glad in your poem. ^__^
Nice job. Keep it up!! ^^

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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A fun part of poetry is making up words, no law against it. This is just pure admiration and love.
Lot's of people don't realize the immediate difference between your and you're. Your signifies ownership, but you're is a conjunction, meaning you are.


How quaint goes your discourse,
unbeknowns to us all
for it has no force
only love does it enthrall

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