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[POEM] The Void of My Heart

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This is a nice short one compared to that story I just posted up. So, enjoy it.

The Void of My Heart

To sit,
is to sit,
but this day,
I sit alone.

Staring into the abyss,
waiting for you,
watching,
and waiting.

As I watch,
my heart begins to chill,
the fire dying,
the fire you set.

I sit,
waiting,
for you to restart that flame,
that once sat in my heart.

That majestic flame,
died.

Now sits,
where that flame was,
a void,
of darkness,
perched in my heart.

And as I hear you come,
that fire is rekindled,
starting a new.

From that void,
came forth a flame,
brighter then the last.

All for you...

cherrybombgurl

cherrybombgurl

Daisuki ^w^

i like the poem u should be a poet on day^^

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~Sayonara ^_^

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

-repeat-

You must tell me why you write such things, for whom does the message intend?

It's too common a theme here in MT, love is rampant in people's writing. However, the poetry is still in infancy, such a cumbersome stage of development.

-repeat-

marauder09

marauder09

Cruisin around the world

That poem is really good^^ Hope to see you more poems from you soon. Laterz

"I need the sunshine of your heavenly eyes, after the day's great sun. And if i had a rose for every time i thought of you, I'd walk through a garden forever" Secret quote Signature Image

xange

xange

~white bunny~

Well as rampant as your poems are i wish i had a bf who could write with passion...lol

she'll **** you just for the taste


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Very nice! I am not very poetic but I can say what is a good and what is a bad one! Yours is a good one! Keep it up :D

Thanks everybody.

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