I have seen too much squandered poetic talent here, so I would like us to give each other advice on writing more creatively. First, if you are serious in the least about writing in a more poetic sense or developing your art further, please take some time to read at least this http://www.poewar.com/archives/2005/03/21/poetry-writing-tips-explained-tip-three/
It helps people design better approaches and works of art when more options are available. Remember, these are suggestions, cause we all have a toolbox. The toolbox consists of our arsenal of tools that we use on a daily basis, why not get more tools into your box? If you don't like a tool, throw it away, needless to say.