Nearer my God to Thee~~ Poem

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Deneiko

Deneiko

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Based on one of my favorite anime pairings. (:
Awfully long for my first attempt at a decent poem ever ^^;
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I'll never let go
I promise
I'll kiss this black corpse in my hands
for one last time,
And savour your frozen lips,
These aren't my tears,

It's untrue, but it's over,
My only salvation couldn’t hear me,
Couldn't hear me scream,
Come back! Come back!
I hear the softest hymn,
There's a blinding light
...and I no longer breathe.

These words are quivering inside,
I know I'll see you again
We'll make each other happy again,
And our lips will dance and have a ballad, together
In the rain, like never before
This pleasurable pain you give me, it will be tolerated,
And I'll look and I'll wonder if you're there for me
I'm sorry, my voice is breaking.

And I'll throw your diamonds in the water
And kiss the biggest one of them ‘good bye’
Not yet, it's not too late
oh please come back,

I'll look in that mirror one last time
And gaze at you like I’ve never before
I'll lay myself to sleep and dream...
And which is more, I'll dream forever

Now I walk down a dark hallway,
But darkness no longer means the least to me
I find the light, hope, and 'tis shines brightly
I walk, I walk
I walk blindly up the stairs
I see my reflection!
I see myself, oh my love!
You've been waiting for me!

You reach out with your hand,
And I open my heart you
No more hate, no more lust
And for the last time, I'll give you back that beautiful kiss
And make it last for ever.

This dream, it will last for a life time,
More than a dream,
I'll see you, no matter the distance between us,
Nearer my God to thee,
I'll love you, where ever you are,
You as a heathen, we'll rule these hells
I'm sorry...these words...
...I cry.

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  • Sep 21, 2005

Zekkeyen

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Wow very long, but I really love your intro at the begining, it pulls you into a short story inside your poem, you did such a great job, I really love it. ^^

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  • Sep 21, 2005

Deneiko

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Quote by ZekkeyenWow very long, but I really love your intro at the begining, it pulls you into a short story inside your poem, you did such a great job, I really love it. ^^


Yay! At least someone read it. Thanks! ^^

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  • Sep 21, 2005

Zekkeyen

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Quote by Deneiko

Quote by ZekkeyenWow very long, but I really love your intro at the
begining, it pulls you into a short story inside your poem, you did
such a great job, I really love it. ^^


Yay! At least someone read it. Thanks! ^^

Your very welcome *nods*

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  • Sep 21, 2005
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It is kind of long. XP
But nice. I like it. It's like some kind of story. Nice poem.

  • Sep 22, 2005

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