This was written for my creative writing class.... Some of the elements had to be in there.. so I apologize if some parts seem a little cheesy...
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The snow falls
erasing my footprints
a dark object appears
as I walk closer
I notice it is a girl
The snow falls
covering me with white
I hear footprints coming
I look out into the snow
and see a boy
The snow falls
the girls eyes
silver and boubtful
pull me in
The snow falls
the boys eyes
black and sorrowful
break my heart
The snow falls
the girl looks at me
her black hair
foreign in the snow
The snow falls
the boy looks at me
his pale skin
blending into the scenery
The snow falls
This girl
I've seen her
she overwhelms
my dreams
The snow falls
this boy
he seems so familair
I've seen him
in many of my dreams
The snow falls
Elle Pepper
she whispers
barely audible
over the roar of the wind
The snow falls
Alexander Salt
he says
closing his eyes
to the harsh wind
The snow falls
I reach
for her
The snow falls
I grasp
his hand
The snow falls
they walk
hand in hand
into the eternal
abyss
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So... how did you like it... If you didnt tell me what you didnt like... if you read it jsut comment... I really want to know... even if you hated it... Guess what I had to put into it....



