[:POEM:] No wonder

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jasaiyajin

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I want to dedicate this one to somone, if you wonder, then by all means just gander. I hope people will not get too confused by the writing, cause the poem is very packed with symbolism and a piece of Greek prophesy. Can anyone catch it?

on a nightly prose
mind wandering slightly
she was there and arose
and strode reaming almighty

the fear, here she cometh
sneaking, creeping, peeping
loose does the grip get
always failing, availing

whence came Cassandra?
not a soul could believe
but we climbed together
nevermore to bereave

to fall is to catch
22 yet I am stronger
your will is a match
I adore you, no wonder

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  • Sep 23, 2005
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hmm...cassandra was the one whose prophecies would not be believed altho they were true right? (apollo and troy and such). good job w/ the poem by the way.

  • Sep 23, 2005

PAche

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nice!you've started poetry too...and with rhymes.ooohlala.and you were the one asking what is the point of poetry LOL

very insightful poem, and like yuo mentioned, quite prophesy-like with those old age words e.g cometh

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humm i wonder who is this poem for?? ^_~

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BlkLotus

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wow that is nice. i love this one. you did a great job on this. two-thumbs way up on this one!!

xange

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~white bunny~

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waw sounds like a confession of love, but to whom lol

she'll **** you just for the taste


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  • Sep 23, 2005

j0n0

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You m*^*%* f%$#%* as*@^#, I already reviewed three poems form xange and now you throw another one. This is suppose to be my vacation, I don't want to think if I could help it. Nevertheless... it is quite a nice love poem [wait isn't this your first love poem?] So whos that special someone.

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  • Sep 24, 2005

Zekkeyen

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Quote by jasaiyajin
on a nightly prose
mind wandering slightly
she was there and arose
and strode reaming almighty

ooo great line right here, sounds neat sounding, great job on the poem!

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  • Sep 24, 2005

leosama84

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Very Nice Poem, but how many times have u proposed?

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It was a good poem. Casandra was the bringer of death, right? Or something like that anyway.

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