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{poem} forever waiting

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nimiru

nimiru

*~ locked heart ~*

~forever waiting~


waiting . . .
waiting where the sky is clear blue
and where the grass is vast as the sea
and where dreams can be dreamt
while sleeping under a great big tree
i wait and wait
until i can no longer feel
the tear drops of heaven
nor smell the sweet scent of wild flowers
nor taste the delicious pastries that one makes
nor hear the distant voice from afar . . .
i'll wait forever and ever
and ever and ever
and after that
i will not remember why or who i am waiting for . . .
for i am eternally lost in a dream . . .
a fantasy . . . or lost in myself . . . in a dark or
cold dimension . . .
waiting . . .
waiting . . .
waiting . . .
for someone . . .
anyone . . .
to find me . . .

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"Words aren't the only thing that let people know what you're thinking..." - Tifa Lockhart, FFVII

j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

I found you, lol. Nice poem, i love the almost constant use of imagery. And the rhythm of the poem is fast with a happy tone and then slowly progresses into a slow sad state. well done.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

This is a really good poem. The flow of the poem is great. Good job!

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jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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i must disagree with the concensus, something doesn't seem right here... waiting is what makes life pass you by, are you sure it's a good idea? why not become the hunter, not the prey?!?!! maybe i missed the point, it's rather late already... wtf am i doing up... O.o

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Ish377

Ish377

Q Genesis

not very meaningful poem
but it does have a nice click to
wat your tryin to show us

so ish kewl, maybe abit more stronger words
used would b nice

but its fine the way it is :D
8/10 my rating

kusco

kusco

Nice ? Me ? What a joke

This poem really shows your personality. But always waiting won't make you go forward. There's a time you must stop waiting and go for it

Bye everyone. I left Minitokyo.
Hope to see you soon.

lthnadml

lthnadml

Chasing shadows . . .

Quote by kuscoThis poem really shows your personality. But always waiting won't make you go forward. There's a time you must stop waiting and go for it


Yeah, i agree. :D Your poem is very beautiful . . . but go for it! :D

A nocturnal concerto,Candlelight whispers me where to go,Hymn of gathering stars as my guide,As I wander on this path of the night

inuyasha-hanyou7

inuyasha-hanyou7

~Dark Demon~

Lovely poem. Thanks for sharing it. :)

nimiru

nimiru

*~ locked heart ~*

thx for all ur comments!! i really appreciate it!! :)

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SakuraMonsumi

SakuraMonsumi

Aishiteru~~!!

This is a really pretty poem! ^-^ I like it!

If you aren't remembered, then you never existed.

Elsie

Elsie

Snow.Drops*

wow...you're good at making poems, to me anyway, cause i'm not a very poetic person! keep 'em up! :)

*Love is like quicksand, the longer you stay in, the harder it is to get out.*
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Ganjamus

Ganjamus

Insanity's Asylum

My favorite so far... your choice of words help me visualize what you're describing... it's a beautiful poem :D

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Melodyfpf

Melodyfpf

Murderous princess..

NYAAAAAAAAAAAAA~~~~~~~~~ SO NICEE!
Good jobbie done!~
i love this one!

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I'm back! :D

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