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Poem - Desired Love

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I live alone
In this lonely world
I live but nightmares
In this painful reality

I desire but one thing
A simple, yet complicated thing
Why is it so hard to obtain
In this world filled with shame

This simple peace of affection...
Do I deserve to feel such a feeling
What pleasure does it bring?
What gift does it offer?
Why is it so hard to get?
To recieve some piece of affection from you...

I need you with me
Free me from this nightmare
Free me from this pain

I want to by my side...
I want you close to me...
I want to feel your touch...
Is this merely lust?
Or is it truly love?

Tell me...
Tell me what I want to hear
Tell me how you truly feel

I want to hear...
I want to hear those three simple words
I want to hear them from you
I want to hear...
I Love You...

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otonashii okami

this is beautiful. absolutely beautiful.. such raw emotion in this.. please do more

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hmmm....pretty good but it's like stating the obvious..anyway, it's beautiful^^

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Increadibly Cute

This is very good, some lines don't fit in too well, but very good.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

Fab-bu. :)

I love the last stanza. Great job. The rhythm you got going is nice.

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