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[Dedicated POEM] Blue Moon

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Mrchak

Mrchak

Welcome to Oblivion

Blue Moon

Sitting at the window, looking at the sky,
A Blue Moon is shining while time passes by,
This feeling of peace, tranquil and white,
Watching the moon not losing from sight,
The heavens above, I can see her face,
I will submit, her I will embrace,
I will guard you, with black wings of mine,
I will fight the sun, until I am blind,
With claws of mine, the enemy's mind,
I will burn them all, and you i will find,
Just keeping you safe, as I promised I will,
I will be your guardian, tough as steel,
Never let go of my hand and you will see why
These black wings of mine will never make you cry,
I will protect you until the day i die,
I will protect you, never tell a lie,
I am your prisoner, your friend and foe,
Every emotion in front of you i will show,
Every tear,wound, the Blue Moon will heal,
The darkness of my heart it's light will steal,
It will not matter how do I feel,
Before you my friend, I'll always kneel,
With my fiery hands, meteor claws,
Nothing will stop me, nor my jaws,
I will emerge, from the depths of hell,
I will emerge to keep you well,
In the coldest of winters, the moon will still shine,
I'll keep you warm, make sure you are fine,
No one will tease you or tell you are wrong,
Look me in the eyes so i can see you are strong,
From the freezing cold you tremble and shake,
I will guard you all night, I will be awake,
Under the blue moonlight shining 'cause of you,
Feathers, black and white are symbols of us two...

This song is dedicated to my dear Shaman Sierra 04... Hope you like it ^^

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MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

What a beautiful poem. Wow you have some real talent in writting poems. I hope you will write more. Great job!

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Erinecera

Erinecera

Cat Lover

Nice poem, Mrchak. You really put all your emotions into it. It reminds me of my former obssession. But he's already history for me now. Hope to see more of your works!

I l o v e c a t s !
=^-^= <--- this my loving sidekick, Martin

Very nice...it sort of picked up my current emotions and woke up some memories. Ah,well...waiting for your next one!

cloud-sama

cloud-sama

The Dark Lord

the poem is cool. i cant write poetry becuse i am not createve enof :)

This world shall burn in the fires of hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like this poem. I think you did a great job ^^

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

oh my friend this is beautifully done *sighs* keep up the great work

Wow another great poem! Your really good at writing poetry.I can't wait to see what else you come up with. :)

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Rikimaru-jp

Rikimaru-jp

Katon Karyu Endan

another great poem done by you Mike :) and it's a long one too ;)
i really like it nice :)
keep it up!!!

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Rikimaru-jp

Rikimaru-jp

Katon Karyu Endan

another great poem done by you Mike :) and it's a long one too ;)
i really like it nice :)
keep it up!!!

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Emeralis

Emeralis

Self proclaimed Sugar Monster

Such tranquility, emotion, beautiful poem. :)

Wonderful and has a great rythm to it :)

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j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

Overprotective dude, you gotta let go and let the other person make their own mistakes and feel the consequences of those mistakes. Nevertheless, that is a well written poem. You might of try too often to rhyme almost each line so it kinda dulled the poems effect. But well done.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

Sierra04

Sierra04

My heart belongs to him..Erik...

Nice poem! Thanks! I love it and kinda sad too...keep up the good work! Thanks!

Koenken

Koenken

Crazy Tiger

Very nice.
Your words create images in my mind of this story.
Keep up the good work.

"You should never get between people and their pudding!" - Milly Tompson

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

Quote by MysteryAngelWhat a beautiful poem. Wow you have some real talent in writting poems. I hope you will write more. Great job!

Angel, its amazing that you had the sames words in my mouth.
Great job. I really liked the poem. write more plz!

zelious

zelious

Sleep is Gooood....

Quote by KoenkenVery nice.Your words create images in my mind of this story.
Keep up the good work.


same here. every scene was painted in my mind. its a very good poem and i like it a lot and i can feel the emotion within it. keep it up and keep on writing!

garnet4david

Tree without Leaf

Hmmm you should join http://www.eliteskills.com be sure to visit me there (My nick is garnet4david)

1. LIFE doesn`t need 2 b peRFECT, 2 b WONDERFUL as long as someone REMEBER & CARES. it`s more than enough 2 bEE-HAPI

2. I Am eXiSt to mAkE yOu aN eXiT

3. KOi tO sEki tO wA kAkUsArEnU

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