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[Poem] - Becoming One - Thanks supo! - WARNING!

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After reading supo's poem, I got a bit hyper and wrote my own poem on sex. It's a bit nastier than her's though. BEWARE!

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Becoming One


As you're vulnerable, I change
You're skin soft as blankets, I stroke
You''re hair as fine as silk, I brush
You're tongue as wet as unique, I swallow

I'm beside you
I feel your warmth
You're vulnerability excites me
I cannot wait
And lose control

As a peeping tom, I dive in
You're heart pounds like a virgin
You moan like a virgin,
because you have felt love
I move on to make you feel it

You feel penetration,
You scream with pain, and pleasure
Your scream excites me even more,
And I penetrate you harder than a sword

My sword soon rusts, and injects life into you
The peak of intense emotion,
Is becoming one
Like being in Eden before exile

Drained of my energy, you give it back to me
The wetness and softness of your mouth and tongue,
Gives me pleasure as you hold me like a leash
I explode at your face,
You cleaned the snow

Lets become one again!

Erinecera

Erinecera

Cat Lover

Whoa! SonicWind-chan, I don't know what to think. Yeah, it clearly illustrates your point. ^.^ Full of passion and lust and heat. Nice poem XD

I l o v e c a t s !
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dezidez

dezidez

fanatic

Wow....very nice sonicwind....turely Lovely and Lustful when becoming this feeling of excitment...im feeling the vibes from thins poem its a keeper....keep up the great work...me like this one...very sexy...its a keeper XD :D ;)

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MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

Wow!!! I can really feel the emotion in this poem. Great job :)

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Glad you all liked it.

I was getting turned on writing it.

Sanzosgirl19

Sanzosgirl19

KazukixJubei forever.

Wow. Pretty hot.(Sweaty). Lol your really good. You give just a taste of the real experence. I love your words I can feel the passion. Dirty comes to mind. But what's wrong with taking a step forward and going beond just passion. Love is great and lust is in an instant. Your hips on my thighs my blood on you belly. I drink your sweet whispers I've Survived on your lies. Seized up nude on the tile. I cried out to live to take my revenge. My body divides you. A white hot syringe. Lol sorry I got carried away that was PG 13. But I write NC 17 sometimes. Great job keep up the hot work.^_~

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supo

supo

Geisha=Artist

Very intensei like but one ?.
Why would you write a poem thats gonna make you even more horny ?
and np for the help ^_^ it was my pleasure .^_^
Im gonna put another one out so be ware ^_^ bye.

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kauriswings

kauriswings

skrzydla jej serce

wow this is the second one like this i have read from you... and i'm still wanting more of them. thankyou for letting mt read it.

I'll never forget the day you told me you loved me,
i will always try to forget the day that you said you didn't love me...

leosama84

leosama84

::Peace Maker::

kewlio

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Quote: Drained of my energy, you give it back to me
The wetness and softness of your mouth and tongue,
Gives me pleasure as you hold me like a leash
I explode at your face,
You cleaned the snow


My dear lord... O_O You dun mean.... Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhh nice nice

god....after reading this poem, I feel dirrty

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xluminax

xluminax

Honto ni? Sou ka...

Quote by Milkiyogod....after reading this poem, I feel dirrty

Me too... -puts on jacket- I wonder what would happen if nitetrain saw this... He'd problably write me a 5th poem.... ^^

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