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Not my best poem, but I felt like writing it.
I've decided to do gay poem. I'm not gay, but I feel like writing about gay people.
I feel inferior to my kind
I feel like I'm not what I should be
The softness of my skin, only men will desire
The beauty of a woman seems less appealing.
I am hungry for sword
I want to hold a sword
I want to wet that sword
I want to get stabbed!
I feel so vulnerable
I am not a man
I am a woman endowed with a penis
Wow. If you don't mind me asking what gave you the desire to write this? It's hot yet sad. To sides of a coin. It is prtrayed very well. I like it very well done.
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I've got one more for the night. It's much better. I'll post it soon.
I can't wait to read it.
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lol.....oh shit.....very nice...trust me i know you not gay....but very good describing about someone whos gay....
Quote by Sanzosgirl19I can't wait to read it.
same here man same here.....
o_O....(he wants to get stabbed)..... XD XD yo..this is good even though you think its not...im am such a perv..lol... i am sorri i just cant get over this poem..lol...oh wellz..great job.. ;) ;)
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Haha... Ahhhhhhhhh! The sword! Nice nice I like that. ;) Great poem ya got here
could do with uber refining. the concept is not developed enough, it seems naiive. and at points the emotions just aren't real enough.
sorry. i do criticism :P
>>I watch the stars as they fall from the sky..i held a fallen star as it wept for me, dying..<<
Nice imagery. Sword... ;)
Society is a masked ball, where everyone hides his real character, and reveals it in hiding. -Ralph Waldo Emerson
I don't like this poem, IMO it's horrible
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Wow, that's really good. Especially for someone who isn't gay. You describe what a gay person might or does go through very well. Nice job.
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I'm surprise you did not get flame by anyone that is gay and doesn't share your view in how you describe them. I have gays friends that most likely find this offensive. I don't like it at all... and I don't even common on things I don't like but I feel like every here seems so fake to believe that this is good. Anyway, I don't bull shit and this is just my opinion.
I'd rather be hated for who I am rather than loved for who I pretend to be...
lol
its funny
might offend some people
but funny
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LOL the last line made me crack up...classic -Shira
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