~Poem~Eh..no title..o.o

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SakuraMonsumi

SakuraMonsumi

Aishiteru~~!!

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This poem I did while in class..I'm really embarassed about showing this poem..cuz its my first one practically...>.> Well, here. o.o

I will fly to happiness,
And reminance of the tears.
I can earn a smile by giving a tear,
And never again leave you to sadness.
I will sit under the glass moon,
And wish a small prayer,
For all that makes me laugh,
For those that take my breath away,
For the simplicities that they ignore,
And blow it again for sweet luck.

If you aren't remembered, then you never existed.

kawaiikiyomi

kawaiikiyomi

..*trust is for fools*..

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awww...such a sweet poem sakuramonsumi!! "sit under the glass moon" i find that particular passage kool for sum reason ^_^' its very good for your first poem! keep it up! :D

\"If you were\'nt afraid, you\'d be like Lorcan. He is\'nt afraid because he does\'nt love. To cause such pain you can\'t love or fear, but only crave\"

  • Oct 19, 2005

Ghost357

Ghost357

Da da fua!

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Good poam. :)

Everything happens for a reason, the key to life is to learn what matters most, is that your Answer?

  • Oct 19, 2005

leosama84

leosama84

::Peace Maker::

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Sakura-chan, its really cute for ur first ;),
etto...on ur next one, try to make spaces btwn particular phrases, like make first verse, second verse, etc...u know...
its great for a starter sweety! keep it up! i'm cheerin for ya :nya: Sa-Sugeeii Sakura-Chaaann!!

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kusco

kusco

Nice ? Me ? What a joke

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Woh, sweet poem. I like it.

Quote by SakuraMonsumiI'm really embarassed about showing
this poem..cuz its my first one practically...


Well don't be, for a first it's very well done. I hope you'll write some more, Im lookin forward to it.
See ya

Bye everyone. I left Minitokyo.
Hope to see you soon.

  • Oct 19, 2005

smileagain

Keep smiling! :D

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thats a great poem for a first time ^^
congrats! im a poem fanatic too sometimes, i love to write poems but im embarassed to show them, its nice for you to share your thoughts! Thank You

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  • Oct 19, 2005

dalidadod

dalidadod

..:nya:..

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waw thats really nice one..u dunt have to be embarassed!! its amazin for ur furst one ;) keep it up..and listen to leosama's advice :hmpf:

Shoku

Shoku

Looking for past friends

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Quote by SakuraMonsumiThis poem I did while in class..I'm really embarassed about showing
this poem..cuz its my first one practically...>.> Well, here. o.o

Good job. keep them coming.

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