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[POEM] Ultimate Experience - WARNING!!

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Not my best, but I tried to make it a real turn on.

Ultimate Experience


Wonderland is full of wonders
They do things much better than humans

I open a library book, a swirl of light on one of the page
Sucked in the portal, it takes me far from Earth
This is wonderland, a place of eternal happiness
The night brings warm winds, and clean air
As a teenager, I think about one thing constantly
I go to the warm grass, the warm lake is perfect

Stripped of my clothes, I walk into the lake
I hold on tight to my hardened play thing, with naughty thoughts,
I rub very hard, and very fast
Before I could come, five elves emerged out of the lake

All a very beautiful, and coming to me
I get nervous, and I walk backwards to the surface,
Tripping up, getting more nervous
As the elves come to the surface, they strip off

I get even harder, and more excited
They're looking at me, looking at my hardened pleasure
Soon, all five of them are beside me
I can't run away, they got me down

Three of them are holding me down
Two of them are kissing each other
Suckling on each other's nipples
Going inside each other

They stopped, I'm already hard beyond anything
All five trapped me, and soaking me with their mouths
I can't escape, I don't want to escape

One of them places her boobs on my face
Another inserts my hardened toy into herself
The others are pleasuring each other
On me

So this is how I would lose my virginity
I can hear the elves moan in pain
I breathed out sudden as I felt semen coming out
I feel pain
Each elve took it turns

I do not smell like myself
The elves have soaked me in their body smell

My play thing exits her, and enters her mouth
I have become their bitch
My semen soaked all
They lick it off each other

This is the ultimate experience!

LingshenChao

LingshenChao

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whoa! nice poem, SonicWInd!

Lingshen Chao

Solution: Pull the power cord. Whoops. ^_^

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Sanzosgirl19

Sanzosgirl19

KazukixJubei forever.

Wow. Every mans fantasy. And I must confess I'm a little turned on. I love the way your so open with your words. Going deep inside your mind and reveling your self it takes a lot of bulit up passion to be able to do that. Keep it up. ^_~

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Quote by Sanzosgirl19Wow. Every mans fantasy. And I must confess I'm a little turned on. I love the way your so open with your words. Going deep inside your mind and reveling your self it takes a lot of bulit up passion to be able to do that. Keep it up. ^_~

Only one of my poems are based on my fantasy. This is not it.

The poem based on my fantasy is 'Moon and Star Light Love'.

kusco

kusco

Nice ? Me ? What a joke

Quote by Sanzosgirl19Wow. Every mans fantasy. And I must confess I'm a little turned on. I
love the way your so open with your words. Going deep inside your mind
and reveling your self it takes a lot of bulit up passion to be able to
do that. Keep it up. ^_~

I must confess that I don't find anything "poetic" in this "poem". It appears for me to be just a pornographic review

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Hope to see you soon.

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Quote by Sanzosgirl19Wow. Every mans fantasy. And I must confess I'm a little turned on. I
love the way your so open with your words. Going deep inside your mind
and reveling your self it takes a lot of bulit up passion to be able to
do that. Keep it up. ^_~


I must confess that I don't find anything "poetic" in this "poem". It appears for me to be just a pornographic review

Precisely!

This is what this so-called poem is. When I wrote it, I wasn't even in the mood.

My best poems are when they are about love. Sex doesn't destroy any of my poems about love.

dezidez

dezidez

fanatic

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YOOO...sonicwind....lol....CRAZY SICK......lol..its great...im a pervert..-_-
very nice interpitaion...of the elves...very sexi...its a keeper..lol..i love it...
keep up the great work...cant wait for the next one... XD XD ;)

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Ahhhhhhhh dude great poem. XD I think you've just described every little boys fantasy if ya know what I mean ;)

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VASHTHESTAMPED

Deamon Slayer

Quote by AlishaAhhhhhhhh dude great poem. smiley I think you've just described every little boys fantasy if ya know what I mean smiley

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but down here your MINE...


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Pacman's mouthpiece

Wow, that's some graphic stuff... Could use some polishing, but it's a good start!

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