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[Poem] Who am I?

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tripleG

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Okay people... so bear with me... this is the first poem I decide to upload here in MT... some of you may have already seen it on my userpage... if not then here it is. [b]Time:[/b] I wrote this because I have been having small 'problems' with one of my friends... and this is how I feel... who I am... [b]"Who I am"[/b] I am not HARSH I am HONEST I am not a PESSIMIST I am a REALIST I am not DISTRUSTFUL I am CAREFUL I am not COLD I am INDIFERENT I am not SAD I am TIRED I do CARE about you I just give you your SPACE It is not that I do not TRUST you I just don't want to BURDEN you Do not LIE to me For you will INSULT my intellect Do not VICTIMEZE yourself I won't FALL for your game Do not plant GUILT on my heart Which I do not DESERVE Don't think I do not pay ATTENTION to what you say... Don't think you cannot HURT me... I WON'T show you WEAKNESS For I am too PROUD Yet I am only HUMAN I BLEED And I CRY... I am only a GIRL Trying to be your FRIEND Written by: TripleG Cancel

Okay people... so bear with me... this is the first poem I decide to upload here in MT... some of you may have already seen it on my userpage... if not then here it is.

Time: I wrote this because I have been having small 'problems' with one of my friends... and this is how I feel... who I am...

"Who I am"

I am not HARSH
I am HONEST

I am not a PESSIMIST
I am a REALIST

I am not DISTRUSTFUL
I am CAREFUL

I am not COLD
I am INDIFERENT

I am not SAD
I am TIRED

I do CARE about you
I just give you your SPACE

It is not that I do not TRUST you
I just don't want to BURDEN you

Do not LIE to me
For you will INSULT my intellect

Do not VICTIMEZE yourself
I won't FALL for your game

Do not plant GUILT on my heart
Which I do not DESERVE

Don't think I do not pay ATTENTION to what you say...
Don't think you cannot HURT me...
I WON'T show you WEAKNESS
For I am too PROUD

Yet I am only HUMAN
I BLEED
And I CRY...
I am only a GIRL
Trying to be your FRIEND

Written by: TripleG

• Oct 19, 2005
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Acuni

wrapped in night

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you have a talent for expressing your feelings tripleG i wish i could write poems like this are but i am an antitalent for this things Cancel

you have a talent for expressing your feelings tripleG
i wish i could write poems like this are but i am an antitalent for this things

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supo

Geisha=Artist

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I was gonna make a poem called who am I no fair and i just finished it do you mind if i still put it on MT? Oh and cool poem. Cancel

I was gonna make a poem called who am I no fair and i just finished it do you mind if i still put it on MT? Oh and cool poem.

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shadowcat23

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nice poem you express yourself really well great job Cancel

nice poem you express yourself really well great job

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luckymouse

Always getting the last laugh

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woah riple amazing you write to,im proud for you my freind,great job,thou it did seem alittle cold in the middle,it made perfect sense throuout it,i hope ya write more ^^ Cancel

woah riple amazing you write to,im proud for you my freind,great job,thou it did seem alittle cold in the middle,it made perfect sense throuout it,i hope ya write more ^^

I THOUGHT WHAT ID DO WAS PRETEND TO BE ONE OF THOSE DEAF-MUTES ^_^

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leosama84

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Such words are very true! they make alot of sense as well! as for the poem...its awesome ^_^, i really appreciate u sharin those thoughts of yours... the only way u can fight pain, is proving its opposite ;)... bai bai! Happy Ramadan! :nya: Leo Cancel

Such words are very true!
they make alot of sense as well!
as for the poem...its awesome ^_^, i really appreciate u sharin those thoughts of yours...
the only way u can fight pain, is proving its opposite ;)...
bai bai!
Happy Ramadan! :nya:
Leo

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trinigirl524

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oh snap i saw this poem on your page, i didnt know you made it, its really well done, and relates to reality a lot...great job on your poem tripleG, hope you'll continue making more ^^ Cancel

oh snap i saw this poem on your page, i didnt know you made it, its really well done, and relates to reality a lot...great job on your poem tripleG, hope you'll continue making more ^^

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lthnadml

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Hey, i see that poem in your page. Pretty good. Just keep up the good work and i hope to see more like this beautiful poem. XD XD XD Cancel

Hey, i see that poem in your page. Pretty good. Just keep up the good work and i hope to see more like this beautiful poem. XD XD XD

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pinknin19

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WOW! It's really good. I can't write a poem to save my life, I don't know how. Ur poem is very meanigful, I really feel for u. I hope u can work it out with ur friend. [sigimg] Cancel

WOW! It's really good. I can't write a poem to save my life, I don't know how. Ur poem is very meanigful, I really feel for u. I hope u can work it out with ur friend.
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Iyako

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Nice. Cancel

Nice.

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supadupa

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:D Awesome poem. You really have a talent for that. I like it. Nice job. :) Cancel

:D Awesome poem. You really have a talent for that. I like it. Nice job. :)

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johngimen

E.Y.A.I.M.

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good poem, wish i could write one..........but cant damn Cancel

good poem, wish i could write one..........but cant damn

follow ur heart, abandon ur brain
i aint that smart, but ill keep what i gain

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Rhonda21

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yeah I saw it on your userpage and I really liked it! Nice job!!! Cancel

yeah I saw it on your userpage and I really liked it! Nice job!!!

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swiftsword420

Dead To The World

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your peom ranks high in all of literature, i think you have and could be great for sure. i could make it work, but not hard enough i try? im the one that will make you cry. i get want i want by most means, breaker of hearts and destroyer of things. im the one that will knock you down to the floor, and pull out your hair till you cant stand anymore. i cut you down again and again, the harshest of words and ill never refrain. ill throw you off a bed, and ill crack open youre head. youll wish youd gone with another instead. but im also the one who will hold you close, to keep you warm and fend off a ghost. i can show you best time of your life, and protect you from harm with my own blade and knife. and i could show you the passion, something nobody could fashion. and make you fall in love, faster than a single dove. i know i have my quirks, it could drive you to give me smirks. but all of that is over, so ill pretend i didn't know her. however, i couldve still showed you more, than if you hadnt walked through my door. sorry for writing one of my own. im having a bit of trouble myself over here. and i just felt like getting it out of my system. Cancel

your peom ranks high in all of literature,
i think you have and could be great for sure.

i could make it work, but not hard enough i try?
im the one that will make you cry.
i get want i want by most means,
breaker of hearts and destroyer of things.
im the one that will knock you down to the floor,
and pull out your hair till you cant stand anymore.
i cut you down again and again,
the harshest of words and ill never refrain.
ill throw you off a bed,
and ill crack open youre head.
youll wish youd gone with another instead.
but im also the one who will hold you close,
to keep you warm and fend off a ghost.
i can show you best time of your life,
and protect you from harm with my own blade and knife.
and i could show you the passion,
something nobody could fashion.
and make you fall in love,
faster than a single dove.
i know i have my quirks,
it could drive you to give me smirks.
but all of that is over,
so ill pretend i didn't know her.
however, i couldve still showed you more,
than if you hadnt walked through my door.

sorry for writing one of my own. im having a bit of trouble myself over here. and i just felt like getting it out of my system.

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masterjesse89

Master of ALL Things Spiffy

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That's so pretty! I love it... I dont know if pretty is the BEST word to describe it. but it is nice.... much emotion in it.... I shall try to emulate you.... Keep the poems coming I love them.... I wish you could fave poems..... PLUS fave!!!!! Cancel

That's so pretty! I love it... I dont know if pretty is the BEST word to describe it. but it is nice.... much emotion in it.... I shall try to emulate you.... Keep the poems coming I love them.... I wish you could fave poems..... PLUS fave!!!!!

Once I desire something... I cannot undesire it.
I cannot even try to resist. I will desire it until I have it.
But there is no end
No matter how much I take. I still want.

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DepressedYoukai

Procrastinator

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Hey! This is a good poem Triple G :) I'm kinda having the same problems with friends myself, *sigh* I had read it on your UP also but I didn't know you had written it ^_^' Good job! ^^ i think swiftword's poem is good too :) Cancel

Hey! This is a good poem Triple G :)
I'm kinda having the same problems with friends myself, *sigh*
I had read it on your UP also but I didn't know you had written it ^_^'
Good job! ^^

i think swiftword's poem is good too :)

Impia tortorum longos hic turba fucoces sanguinis innocui, non satiata, aluit.

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Sallyf322

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Lovely poem ^-^ I can almost hear the tone of voice in it...it's neither happy nor mad. Seriously...you're very good at expressions! Not just in your wallpapers (ie. your Sasuke/Itachi wall) but in everything you do! There's always some sort of meaning you put into your stuff and it really comes out. You actually got me thinking in this poem and I would read the line over again to try to comprehend the words you capped and the effects they gave. All I can say is...wow! XD If I could fave a poem, this would be one ^-^ I hope you don't mind if I save it onto my computer...it really speaks to me XD (I have to agree with some of the statements...lovely, lovely poem...) Cancel

Lovely poem ^-^ I can almost hear the tone of voice in it...it's neither happy nor mad. Seriously...you're very good at expressions! Not just in your wallpapers (ie. your Sasuke/Itachi wall) but in everything you do! There's always some sort of meaning you put into your stuff and it really comes out. You actually got me thinking in this poem and I would read the line over again to try to comprehend the words you capped and the effects they gave. All I can say is...wow! XD If I could fave a poem, this would be one ^-^ I hope you don't mind if I save it onto my computer...it really speaks to me XD (I have to agree with some of the statements...lovely, lovely poem...)

"If everyone cared and nobody cried, if everyone loved and nobody lied, if everyone shared and swallowed their pride, then we'd see the day...when nobody died. I'm singing amen I, amen I, I'm alive." - Nickelback: "If Everyone Cared."

If only, if only, the world were like this. If only, if only, it only existed.

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THE-DARK-PRINCE

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I like the way u expressed your feeling.... I like the words u used.... I like the poem.... Keep it up... :) :D XD >_< >.< Cancel

I like the way u expressed your feeling....
I like the words u used....
I like the poem....
Keep it up...

:) :D XD >_< >.<

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mineharu

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[b]Hey TG.. ^^ i have to say Wow.. it shows every lil thing you feel but still you are not giving much info, and it sounds excellent .. i'm my opinion it is a great poem and also you sound very inspired.. awesome job on the poem :) [/b] Cancel

Hey TG.. ^^ i have to say Wow.. it shows every lil thing you feel but still you are not giving much info, and it sounds excellent .. i'm my opinion it is a great poem and also you sound very inspired.. awesome job on the poem :)

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Akaiken

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Oh yeah, that's on your userpage! It's good! Cancel

Oh yeah, that's on your userpage! It's good!

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darknym

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Hi No words, for me is too deeper Dark Nym Cancel

Hi
No words, for me is too deeper

Dark Nym

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I will find myself.
And you bastard, will burn in hell... jo jo jo

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moonaki

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This poem reminds me a lot of myself actually....It is good how you bold the strong words to show what you want to state. Triple G this poem is really good and as I read it the words hit me into realizing how exactly I was feeling with my two best friends...but that is in the past now.Thank you for sharing. Cancel

This poem reminds me a lot of myself actually....It is good how you bold the strong words to show what you want to state. Triple G this poem is really good and as I read it the words hit me into realizing how exactly I was feeling with my two best friends...but that is in the past now.Thank you for sharing.

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Hoturi

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You are very honest in this poem, that's what i really like, and it is a very private, but i think you could do better with some more stylistical work, though that it sounds a bit more like a poem, just think of rhymes and stuff like that... i say that just because i hope it helps you. Anyway, the only important thing is, that you are comfortable with it. greetings Cancel

You are very honest in this poem, that's what i really like, and it is a very private, but i think you could do better with some more stylistical work, though that it sounds a bit more like a poem, just think of rhymes and stuff like that... i say that just because i hope it helps you.
Anyway, the only important thing is, that you are comfortable with it.

greetings

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akazookin

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wah!! nice poen tripleG~!! XD hehe ur really good at expressions ne!! XD XD thanks for sharing XD XD Cancel

wah!! nice poen tripleG~!! XD
hehe ur really good at expressions ne!! XD XD
thanks for sharing XD XD

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