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heres a poem I wrote hope you like it

Fairies flying through air
Dragons hiding in their lair
Kings and Queens sitting on thrones
Wizards and magical stones
Knights swearing on their honor
Adventures around every corner
Maidens of unbelivable beauty
winged creatures and mermaids of the sea
These are the things I long to know
Not in a book or in a show
To run wild and free
To be part of something bigger than me
This dream can not come true
No matter what I do
But I close my eyes and feel the wind in my hair
I listen to nature and imagine Im there.

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Beautiful5oul

Beautiful5oul

Asphyxiated.

fantasy..nice

You said we were all an accident,
with Accidents you'll never know,
What could have been.
But you you'll always be my favorite one.

Sanzosgirl19

Sanzosgirl19

KazukixJubei forever.

Very beautiful. I love it. It's magical. I can feel the emotion you put in to it. You have real talent my friend. Very well done. thanks for shareing it. A+ (*^_^*)

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Graverobber

Graverobber

Heart of Darkness

Very nice, I like the fantasy you create in it. I think almost everyone has an escape of some sort, and it seems (based on this poem) that we have a bit of a common ground for ours.

I really like this one, keep up the great work!

masterjesse89

masterjesse89

Master of ALL Things Spiffy

XD XD XD XD WAY TO GO! I love it... pretty.... Keep the poems coming.

Once I desire something... I cannot undesire it.
I cannot even try to resist. I will desire it until I have it.
But there is no end
No matter how much I take. I still want.

geneticgear

geneticgear

God of Wind

I like your poem! it's very well said!

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mahkohime

mahkohime

Not dead yet

Very nice. It is quite a change from your other poems. As always, wonderful layout and imagery. You are quite the poet!

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Well you already know that I absolutely love your poem.Awesome job Crystal! :D

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luckymouse

luckymouse

Always getting the last laugh

definently a fav in mind,this poem my freind is very awlsome,i like it lots ^^

I THOUGHT WHAT ID DO WAS PRETEND TO BE ONE OF THOSE DEAF-MUTES ^_^

leosama84

leosama84

::Peace Maker::

wow, just simply.................wow!
its wonderful!
i have a dream also....but i can't share it like u ^_^
thanx for sharin ur thoughts ;)
bai bai! keep up the great work!

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pegassuss

pegassuss

peggie

oh wow! how you people do such lovely poems?! :o
I like it :) so magical and and beautiful ^^
Love the way you made the rhymes! nice poem, keep it up!

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kuclo

kuclo

My broken wings

a pretty nice poem my friend ,thanks for sharing ,isso cool whe people use the word "dragon"
see you later

Tienes el valor?o te vale
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Roderick

Roderick

Kato

Nice rhythm ;). I like this one, much more than the other one belive me ^_^'.... nice refreshment, expecialy because of the fantasy that u put in it :). This one is different from the other one's (I mean at those other poems made by other members). Anyway, a "bow" for a job well done :)

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tripleG

tripleG

To simply be

Nice... I think we all have felt that way at least once in our life! Very good job!

^_^

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