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I wanna submit a poem I made. It kinda sucks but it shows my feelings at least...
So tell me what you think^^
The scent of dreams
my favorite
dreaming of him
I can see it
blinded from reality
caught in my fantasy
People call me a dreamer
Immortal love
in my dreams he is with me
Tears staining my face as I wake up
Why isn't he here?
Why do I cry when alone?
Can't he come comfort me?
People call me a dreamer
But all I really need is someone to love...
Seems cute. You must've really thought about it before writing it and expressed your feelings^.^
nice, seemed to be filled with emotions XD
good poem^^
My Newest Submission:Curse Of The Prosperity God
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It's very nice! It has nice imagery too ^^
The Noblest Work of God?
Man.
Who found it out?
Man.
It is a good poem. I liked it alot. You are better at writing poems than what I am. Yours atleast seems to be more like a poem. Unlike some of mine that I tried to make.
Nice poem, Eimin. Like it ^-^
Full of emotion and passion
I l o v e c a t s !
=^-^= <--- this my loving sidekick, Martin
beautiful poem with a lot of emotion and feeling!
it also makes me feel a bit sad.
Don't worry about tomorrow, don't think about
yesterday,
don't live in the future, just make it through today!
u had a way with words.... i like ur poem alot...I can "feel" ur ur feelings in it
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