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...hihi...i thought this wall was my best...but i guess i'm wrong for once T.T
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anyho...this wall...i can't say just look at it! =D
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Looks cute. ^^
But.
The star field is all over the place. o_o I think that if you want shiny particles all over the girl and the background
(I mean the house, it's practically buried in stars ^^), you should make different patterns for the earth and the
sky so that they don't, uh, blend too much. ^^
Then, why did you use the wind filter on the stars that are reflected in the water? It's not like they look
terrible, I just don't understand why you did that.
The girl looks good, it's just that, uhm, she looks like she's lying on the surface of the water. ^^' Is
it supposed to be like that?
As for the wall as a whole, I think I like it. I like the colors and the fact that it's shiny. Nice job. ^^
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The sparkles really degrade the quality of the wall.
It looks really speckled and just not very good >_> It looks more like noise than anything else >_> And I know how you did the water... that's not enough >_>
It was just a filter on a blending mode... methinks you will need to redo that water by either using a chrome tool and perspective or vectoring some water... that's about it from me ...
and the colours are too bright. Lower the contrast ;)
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Wallpaper seems pretty cute, although it looks kind of dotty in most areas.
the wall's too striking and white...the contrast's too great..
maybe lower it down so it won't be so intense?
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It's really good! But in my little opinion you have to change something.
First of all remove the cherry jam from her hairs. Then turn off the water lily lamps: the light from the upside and its
reflex are enough. There is much light on your wall (very well done, I'd say, but still too much). Finally try to
fix the background: it's a bit empty. Some vegetation by the lake (reeds and ferns) would fit. It will be a perfect
"locus ameonus".
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Hi sukie ^___^ It's reallya very nice wallie and I dont know if I can say anything about it because it's
better than any of my wallies ^___^ It's only one thing: you can clear it a little because it looks like a little
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hum at first view it is really nice but i think the lens flare is too strong and there is a little too much of stars, delete somes of them and make a lens flare more soften, i think it would give you a better render ;)
Beautiful Wallpaper Sukie, I do think that you can do better on the water though. there are too much white line thingies
on it.. and too much stars grouped together. In a way it gives the wallpaper a fast paced feeling.. O.o
Besides that, I really like it a lot! Thanks for sharing =D
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I must say this wallie has a very beautiful concept! but it need some work for example! you need to reduce the
brightness cause it's making the wallie especially the character very pale! the background is really fabelous I
like it and it suits with the girl but maybe you should try to decrease the shinning dust around the girl and if you are
going to do so don't forget to decrease their reflections on water too!
personally I see that this wallie is well done but needs only what I have mentioned above!
best luck ;)
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Ummm, I kinda think I have already commented on this when you submitted it o.0
Oh, now you put water effect there.. though it looks nice and clear, it kinda doesnt match the scan, so I guess you
filter it some more, or lower its opacity to suit the scan.. you can also try make it more perspective-like :D
The sparkle on the water is way too much for my eyes @_@
Ugh, I think I already mentioned that the scan looks blurry and kinda low quality, I think you need to clean and enhance
it even more x_x
There are way too much element in the wall and it makes it looks messy..in a kinda bad way.. so I think you need to get
rid either the light or the small glows(or dots).. Maybe you intended them to looks like stars cos they are in the
background as well, but that would mean that the dot shouldnt be in front of her >_<
I do not quite like the flower, they have the same blurry feeling as the scan, maybe you would need to vector them, or
put other element as replacement..
Oh, and because now you put more effect on the water, I cannot really see her reflection on it and it kinda destroy the
whole basic idea of it doesnt it?
Hope that helps :)
it is quite ok....i find the girl kinda flattened...perhaps you should resize the girl...i think there is something wrong.
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dont really like how the star field permeates the whole wall.
remember greg martin's star tuts are only for SPACE view bgs.
i also dont really like how the scan is stretched out and semi transparent. maybe it was resized wrong?
the water has way too many ripples that look somewhat like stars with a motion blur applied >__> try to smooth it
out a bit so it looks like water cause right now its too much going on.
water lotuses are way too bright. try to dim them a bit by applying filters.
lol i think the law of nature has been corrupted this time XD
anyway you gota work at it and put some thought into a wall before putting it together.
keep it up
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