Work in Progress: dual screen

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BiNumber3

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Hey this is a wall i started about a year ago, i put off workin on it till recently
but i'm almost done with it, just need to make my bg

What im plannin on doin for it is a bunch of cables that fade into digital wording( 1's n 0's), that way the digital part would go with motoko and the cables would go with jo(you'd have to see the anime to kno wat i mean)
Any ideas, or critiques would be welcome, thanks

http://img177.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dual3ig.jpg

btw,tho it's meant to be dual screen, i designed it so it can be cut in half to use either as a single screen wall (also i dun have dual screens, just thought it'd be fun makin one) :)

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tareren

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Hmmm, I think you did pretty good for the wall, though I do not really like the black color background..nor the monotone red in the right side.. it makes all the color drown, maybe you would wanna do a different color ones...
Other than that, I think extraction and composition are generally fine..
But maybe you would wanna do a little more something for the background on the left side later ^^
Since you haven't reconstruct the whole background, I cannot really give anymore suggestions (since you understand what you are going to do) :D tell me if you edited this and I will give more suggestion to that version ;D

Hope that helps..

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nice wallpaper ..

why wait with working on it ? looks nice so far. .

not enough time to work ?

doesn´t matter. . looks great.

is it done yet ?

maybe give the girl in teh right a shadow. . she jumps out, doesn´t fit in the back as good as the left one. .

onther then that . . all great . . nice and clean. . : )

thx man

  • Nov 02, 2005

BiNumber3

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Well, i modified it a bt, mostly fixing blemishes, but i did make the right side a bit dimmer
Also i made jo not jump out as much:P
I'm not plannin on postin an update till i get a bg goin, tho it'll be a while due to school, if there are any requests i could up the updated version but it's really not much different from the above
Thanks for the help guys

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woo nice....but i don't like the red on the right hand side, it's tooo red...
it'll be cooler if u can make some techy bg...like a battleground or something...
but nonetheless, it looks pretty good ^^

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BiNumber3

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prolly not the place to put it, but if anyone who's ever watched or has bakuretsu tenshi, i'm lookin for a screen of one of the bad guys, the one with the cables, i wanna see if i can use that for the bg in some way

btw, i wasn't plannin on it but here's an updated version
http://img371.imageshack.us/my.php?image=dual2ru.jpg

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Hm...I rather like the first version better. The right side of the second one looks too red to me...but perhaps that's just me ^_^' . Can't wait to see what you do with the bg. Judging from the mist you've already added, I'm going to guess that it's going to be scenic/abstract. Anyway, it's a great start. :)

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GREAT job, I would love to see more dual screen walls on MT

It's indeed a shortage.
I like the first one like bluSake.

  • Nov 07, 2005

BiNumber3

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hmm, two who say the first was too bright n two who say it's just right:/
Well, i'll go the midroute:D i'll make the second version a little more red on the right, keeping everything else the same
I think the main prob with the first was that Jango was bright, not necessarily the background, so i've also made jango less red, as for the second, i prolly over did the red removal, making it less virbrant and more boring

I won't be workin on it for a bit due to several weeks worth of midterms and quarter term exams:/

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cool wall. sexy, nice that its dual

  • Nov 07, 2005

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