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Work In Progress: Rejected Eva Pilots(Abstract-ish)

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Teryon

Teryon

He who invents Ultratech

Once again in the Sandbox..why not, it pays to get advice from all angles. Besides, I like being able to make quick qualititative leaps in skill easily, and this place helps. SO..

http://img378.imageshack.us/img378/9178/rejected6gv.jpg

I found this about a month ago on some nameless website found through extensive google-link-traversing. Personally, I like Hikari`s expression here, she looks like she`s having WAY too much fun.

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kai81220

kai81220

anti Nobunaga

first off the wall is way too busy.
gota have a main focus and then the other scans should be more merged into the bg.

scan quality is low. way too blurry and even a bit grainy.
maybe a good vector trace would fix that.

the bg is nice its too chaotic for the wall. unfortunately i dont have any suggestions for an alternate bg at the moment.

its a good start but it needs a reworking on the basic concept

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tareren

tareren

||Teh Panda Queen||

Hmmm, agreeing to Kai, the wall is soooo busy
You should clean the scan, it looks way too blurry compared to the rest of the background...
I think on the background you put another two EVAs right? To make it less busy and messy looking, I think you shouldn't texture (or lower opacity, or filter, etc) the two EVAs behind her.. you should leave it as good quality scan :) I think after that, having the abstract background would be okay :D
Rather than the technical aspect, you should work more on the composition of the wall.. you should try to balance it :D

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bluSake

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bluSake

Very fun XP , but I have to agree that the bg and text is too sharp for the scan, and the wall is a little too busy. It looks like you're going the abstract path rather than the star field, so I guess just use less heavy brushes.

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Patlabor13

Patlabor13

The Last Sane Man

Humerous pic. Like the original art, but the text and scene outside is too complex and busy. Maybe add a scene from End of Eva/Rebirth where the units 5 and up are fighting asuka. Good luck.

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Shagmar

Shagmar

Resident NERD

How about you just make it look like the cockpit of an eva...it takes a lot of the noise out of the picture but you can still have all three pilots in it...

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