(SONG) Drifted....Away.....

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Basically I'm kinda stuck in poems so I'll go with songs now for the time being...this is sort of inspired by Devildude's fanfic...so thank you, arigatou! XP

Awaken the howls of midnight,
Once a soul, lost in time....
Couldn't feel the poison cursing the blood,
Uncontrollable insanity in me,
Unleashes the pain, set me free...
The human I feel is numbed,
By the cold tainted heart,
Smoking spirits travelling my soul,
Through the hands of a fallen,
All that's eternity drifted away,
Sensational sins feeling my pleasure,
As fangs of alliance ripped me apart...

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Sierra04

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My heart belongs to him..Erik...

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Cool song...though short it's nice! well done my friend! you're good in poem and now good in making songs! hope you'll make more! keep it up okay! ^_^

  • Nov 11, 2005

Rikkablurhound

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O.o
Nice song^^
Great job XD Milkiyo, But I think human to person would sound better, just my opinion...
when u become singer, remember to give me an autograph ^^

griffin

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Amazing. Gotta watch your future / present tense though. I'm shocked you wrote something that good.

  • Nov 11, 2005

Devildude

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incroyable! incredible....
nice one man, you say my fan fic inspired you...?
wow...i a elated....very nice, perhaps you can post this song under the fan fic thread as well?
i guess you must be a very creative individual. perhaps one day a stage performer.

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Sierra04

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Quote by RikkablurhoundO.o
Nice song^^
Great job XD Milkiyo, But I think human to person would sound better, just my opinion...
when u become singer, remember to give me an autograph ^^

I agree with Rikka-san...when u become a singer someday, hope i'll have your autograph!

  • Nov 11, 2005
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all of you are AMAZING
WOW

"Giving up doesn't always mean you're weak. It just means that you are strong enough to let go."

royaldarkness

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very interesting ;) nice song u have there milkiyo-san!

DarkSavior

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It has a nice flow to it ^^ though I wish you had made it longer with a chorus or what not but I guess you have to start somewhere sometimes. Anyway, it's still good so thanks for sharing it...

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  • Nov 11, 2005
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very nice i like it indeed i like dark stuff cheery makes me want to vomit x_x

  • Nov 14, 2005
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erm...the song's expanding as it goes but this time it's a poem..lol
er...this is about the soulreaver accepting his new form..lol XP XP
feeling the danger and liking it...thanks again devilsan! XD

DANGER[u][/u]

A feeling of rush in the blood flowing,
seeping into every step, every mile,
Skips of heartbeat ever foreboding,
as a sense of pleasure smirking my smile,

Shadows erupting from within every pace,
dawning towards the sensation,
Swallowing up the steps of truth in my face,
as stealth was my creation......

Slowing....within the range of falling,
swepts of wind thrusting the excitement,
Flying away from the danger calling,
As darkness hidden my contentment...

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so precise.....i am sure the character is well described. very much like the first Reaver, who embraces his strength but hates himself, a self pity and loath yet of a loving kind. wonderful
Thanks!.

your song is a part where i must say is well done and adds the important setting to the story.

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DarkSavior

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You guys are into soul reaver? Been awhile since I played the game... but anyway... sound pretty right and pretty dam good in my opinion. Has a nice flow to it too. You getting better at this... so I hope you post more of your work. Thanks for sharing it ^^

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  • Nov 17, 2005

Sierra04

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My heart belongs to him..Erik...

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Superb! Great! Cool! My friend, that's a great song! Love it...^_^

  • Nov 17, 2005
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very nice addition keep it coming!

  • Nov 18, 2005

nolove

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better forget me ...

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hoew, a great lyrics ><, I wanna listen to its music >< :D, keep it up, Milkyo-san ><

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Sierra04

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i want to hear you sing it...teehee....

  • Nov 19, 2005
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Amazing job, i like this song. It's really great. Hope to see more of you. n.n

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<_< finally another poem LOL..this might be my last one unless a miracle happen and I'm free of workload! yay! >.< dream on..LOL
oh..this is based on the fight the soul reaver had..his first training I guess XP (sorry..not that good..have to rush)

My First Training

I see all the people cower in fear,
As they look at the abomination here...
Straight in front of their eyes...is the one without a heart nor a soul,
I tried to see my reflection which wasn't even there,

.....Why has it got to be my destiny?!
Of all the people...why do you choose me?
Blocking all my thoughts, I focused on the person in front; the master I see,
Called to me to embrace my destiny...

Feeling a lot of pain yet no longer feeling any regret,
I lurched forward for the first attack,
Instead....even my monster was no match...
Until I lost my sanity to that fact,

Something....just something inside me was out of control,
It was as if an old ally was trying to guide my path,
I took my master by surprise with my wrath,
And I know; this was meant to be.....


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Rikkablurhound

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Woah... This is cool.... XD
I like this one!
wheres the fav button? XD
Gambateh!
whos the master? ^_^'
the poem sound like were from an anime world! XD

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man! i mean girl! this is awesome. so cool, this poem is really good, i so LIKE it. And yeah this is perfect for some anime. A really good job n.n

DarkSavior

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Hey Milkiyo! Sorry for the late reply ^_^' the song/poem sounds really good ^^ I like the last one you post up the most out of the 3 but I have to admit I'm not that into soul reaver... it still sound pretty damn good ^^,

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  • Jan 03, 2006

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