hey girls and boys. this poem i did it a year ago and now i have 40 poems ^_^ i love writing so much so here ya go, its part one of a story...as a poem XD
Help Part one
dark feeling crossing my mind
trying to look where it could hide
this darkness carries with it some feelings
of course with negative meanings
like lonely, depressed, and sad
and all their colors were really black
darkness found a place to hide,
it decided to stay by my side
this place with my poor heart
darkness decided..and we have never been apart
then i became different and sad
leaving everything i once had
this feeling ordered me to hate
and darkness...managed to prevail once again
so what do you think? can you rate it for me out of 5? ^_^ plllllllz next time i'll do part 2 and remember, i did this about a year ago so everytime i make a new one, it will become better XD i know that i may have some grammar and spelling mistakes, i am not that good on them ^^
