Well, firstly, the wall is kinda empty on the upper part... at the background to be specific >.< ... It kinda look
like you anyhow pasted the cloud lines there, and the moon doesnt really suit the wall, I think you should put more
texture on the moon, and make it so that it blends in more with the background :D As for the background itself, maybe
adding more cloud lines, as well as some more texture to it will work out fine :) you could try adding stars too :D
As for the scan, I think your extraction is well done, but I kinda have a feeling you textured the scan (either that, or
you havent really cleaned it up, I'd like to think that you textured it though)... If you did, I am suggesting that
you textured the whole wall as well, cos as of now, the wall looks empty and very 'clean' compared to the scan
(the scan also has this dreamy quality, while the bg doesnt) >_<
About the cloud below (am guessing you are using brush to make them), I think you are better off if you put the clouds
in the sky, and maybe put some city/buildings there instead :) It could work as if she is on her window or on top of
some roof of a house, thus explaining the city/buildings behind... the way it is now, it looks so fantasy and dream-ish
OX .. oh well, that was just a suggestion :D
As for the stars, I think you should not put stars in front of clouds.. there is just NO WAY that stars could be closer
to us than clouds... clouds are way nearer, and thus they blocked any view of stars >_< and furthermore, your
stars are brushed, and I can see the brush line quite clearly >.< maybe you should clean that line (somewhere in
the right nearly bottom side of the moon) :D
I like the text :D but I do not quite like the small one, I think you should change the font of the small one :x
Most importantly, I think you should consider the proportionality of the wall, and make sure that every element in the
wall has the same tone to it :D so that it would be balanced well <_< I hope you get what I mean here...
Ummm, as for trying not to make it looks similar to the other two walls, I dunno what you are talking about cos you
didnt even provide links to the other two walls (so I don't know how they look like too), thus I cannot advise you
on that >_> gomen ne~~
merged: 11-20-2005 ~ 03:44pm
Oh, actually, your wall only need a bit tweaks here and there to make it looks good :D but if you want it awesome, you
should really think over the background scheme and make sure the tone and texture of each element matched each other
:)
Hope that helps ;)
