{POEM}Love...Is.Strong.Enough.To.Forgive

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I've been looking for the answer,
for as long as I could remember,
Yet it fades and clouds day by day,
till I can hardly think of what to say,

My memory is failing me,
the things and people I see,
Who..what..where..I will never know,
like the saying I'm reaping what I sow,

I can only think of you......
the love that I will always feel,
the one that I tried to forget....
Now feeling wasted and regret,

The love fading as the memory lingers away,
if I could only turn back time to that day,
This feeling...caused by the sight of you mistreated,
by this person who was undeniably twisted,

I soon realized that for you..I was angered,
not by the past that occured,
But by the one you don't deserve,
This monster...you're forced to serve,

For you...I am willing to fight,
even though I have no right,
I found out that my love for you was never gone,
only...hidden by the thorns...

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nice
a poem with rhyme and feeling

if it is about you, then good luck

be pessimistic so that youll never be disapointed and will live a happy life.

  • Dec 06, 2005

leosama84

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very nice!
i like the rhyming part ^_^
thanx for sharin ur feelings ;)
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Cornetvee

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Aww... It's so touching... Nice! Wondersul work, Milkysan!

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  • Dec 06, 2005

LonelyFriend

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Humm.very touching poem tht I never read before...Wow...I like this poem very much.Hey ! Keep it up and wait your next poem :pacman:

kusco

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Nice ? Me ? What a joke

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Whoa, this one is pretty good.
It's rare I get caught by a poem. You made it this time.
Good work

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Hope to see you soon.

  • Dec 06, 2005

Faye-chan91

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It's beautiful *-* I like these rhymes
Milkiyo-san, you are pretty good! Thanx to share your feeling there ^___^

Devildude

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i have a feeling you are writing to a guy does not hear you...
this is good, i like this one a lot. The rhyme is good, systematic rhyme with meaningful orientation.
Hidden by thorns sound very holy yet sad. This is quite a piece of something indeed.

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Marzuki

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VERGE

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do not worry coz marzuki is rite here!

We are not alone....

  • Dec 06, 2005

DarkSavior

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It's it the end of the world? "lol" Milkiyo wrote a love poem and I have to say it's the best poem I heard for awhile... This is my new favorite from you. Though if you have a moment? Can you explain what you mean in your points of view in case I'm not understanding every line correctly but it's beautiful regardless. I think it's alot of personal feeling in this... Great job and keep it up ^^

I'd rather be hated for who I am rather than loved for who I pretend to be...

  • Dec 06, 2005
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Simply....beatifull.. >_< T_T
Seriously, u must've been really inspired the day you wrote that.
Keep up the good work ;)

  • Dec 06, 2005

melissa-clyne

feel the music...

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hello! wow beautiful poem! very touching indeed^^I love it keep up the good work

Don't be sad because it finished, be happy because it happened...

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  • Dec 06, 2005

akazookin

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arghhh! mil-san! it's a sugoi poem! XD
lol i like the rhyming part..it's veri interesting and meaning..kinda a bitter sweet ending.. *sniffs* *sniffs* veri touching ne!

KANBATE YO~! Q(^^ Q)

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Sierra04

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My heart belongs to him..Erik...

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i love this poem^^ well done!

  • Dec 06, 2005
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Woah, I'm not really into love poems, but still I like very much this one! Meaningful, inspiring and full of emotions! ;)

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  • Dec 07, 2005

angel-type

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beutiful....just buetiful. i love this poem. great job. it's very touching. did u rite that?

  • Dec 07, 2005

sukumei

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oh i love you Milkiyo!

I would like to run a friendly critiquing service for Minitokyo artists. I will try to make my opinions professional and defiantly unbiased although i will speak ideas for the general public. Critiquing service MT thread

  • Dec 07, 2005

Inuhanyoumiko5

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O.O...Milkiyo...Wow... LOVE IT! I'm not even a poem person and this one..*sniffles and cries* So touching. Love it love it love it! You are really good at poems. You could win money. My poems...ahem...>_> Not good at all. I think i'm a little too pessimistic for poems but this one I really liked. Keep up the good work! *hugs* ^_^

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You know whats weird. (I don't know why i'm saying this -boredness- lol) It's weird that I am always so happy and good but i'm completely pessimistic. I look outside and see dead people and ghosts in my house...yet i'm so nice...Does that ever happen to you or am I just loco? lol

When i'm bored I count the buckels on my straight jacket...
FEAR ME! >_<

  • Dec 07, 2005
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hello everyone! How are you? I am new here and looking for new friends. someone please talk to me

  • Dec 07, 2005
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That is very good Milkiy ^^ I actually came up with a beat for it and it works very nice. ^^ Nice job.

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erm... id unno what to say....
am not into love... ^_^'

  • Dec 08, 2005

griffin

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Super Natty

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Yeah, undoubtedly your best work so far. Well done

  • Dec 08, 2005

Rikkablurhound

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*Kero~! O_o

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Oh...
Sorry that I came so late... >_<
I read it... carefully *grins*
This is really good, everything rhymes perfectly, & the beat is good too...
Your best! ^^
I like it alot... too bad I cant fav it... *grins

BlkLotus

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bara tsukiyo

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you did a wonderful job on this. it holds alot of meaning behind it. very good. wish i could fav this.

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