Hey everyone! Okay this is my very first poem that I've ever submitted on Minitokyo. I don't write alot of poems but I love to read them. I couldn't really think of a title to this poem so if you have any suggestions please give them. Any kinda comments good or bad are welcome, so here goes. I hope you like it.
Eyes wide open
My body deathly still
Tears stain my face
My screams of pain your thrill
As I slip into the darkness
Something pulls me back
Freedom gets farther away
And I'm right where I started at
Ther's nothing you can do to make this pain reced
Your attempts are in vain
As I slit my wrist and watch myself bleed
A warm crimson liquid seeps through the cut
And a familiar pain washes through my soul
The bitterness, the pain, the tears I shed at night
Secrets of my past begin to unfold.
That was it. I know it's not as good as it should be but I tried.
merged: 12-14-2005 ~ 06:05am
Okay I need to clarify this. The title of the poem is unreachable instead of unreacable. I didn't know how to
change it so the only thing I could think of was to post it.
Ja ne ^_^
