This is my other poem.This poem is connect with my first poem.Hope you like too.
Already passed four years ,
four years never saw you again,
after you promised me,
you will came back from war
to give a surprise for me .
How could destiny change everything,
to separate us to other world.
So your surprise is your death....
Why....you just go away and died.
I just can missing you hopefully,
remember you stay with me together,
face our problems and play when child.
Now all just become a story......
I miss you repeat and repeat,
like the desert miss the rain.
Wish to tell you my feeling,
But ....but why you just leaving.
I cant hear your sound ,
Like you left a wound.
If I only can see you in dream,
I wish I dont want wake up forever.
Any comment ? Thank you to read this.