Winter Memories {POEM}

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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The tea pot begining to whistle
telling me the water is ready
as the scent of fresh baked cookies linger in the air
With a mug of hot cocoa and marshmellows on top
i use a peppermint stick to stir it up
it begins to desolve while i sit by the window
and watch as the snow falls slowly
a warm cookie beside me and my mug in my hand
staring out at the wintery wonderland


Happy Holidays everyone.

enjoy and critique if you must but be gentle

MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

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I really like this poem. Its very descriptive. Great job!

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  • Dec 19, 2005
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omg...stop..you're making me hungry now..food..I need FOOD! XD

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WolfMaster

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The Hunter

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agin very good

  • Dec 19, 2005

royaldarkness

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Restless Soul

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interesting poem :) full of description

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Sounds like a delightful Christmas.
Wish my mom can bake cookies.....
Very nice poem. Always descriptive

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Rikimaru-jp

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Katon Karyu Endan

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This is a very delicious poem XP I never heard a poem about food before XP
you really did a good job B-lotus!
keep it up!

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nice poem. It kinda makes me hungry and I have a while to go before lunch so I'll be sure to read it again later. Good Job Though.

  • Dec 19, 2005

Kayen

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Lord of Nothing

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wow nice

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You must see death to find life, you must look into evil to find the good
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  • Dec 19, 2005

DoubleBarrel

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Nice, oh yeah and happy hoildays to you too.

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  • Dec 20, 2005

Invincible

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Angel and Sierras Guardian

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Nice one...Im tierd of commenting your poems...Hehe just kidding...

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JadeTigress

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kawaii dorei

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nice and very discriptive. keep it up

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  • Dec 20, 2005
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ditto on what JadeTigress said.

chisaikame

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happy camper o^^o

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you have captured the moment perfectly!... awesome! sugoi! XD XD

ego vici mundum

  • Dec 22, 2005

wolfling

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otonashii okami

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sounds like a wonderful Christmas scene! keep it up

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  • Dec 24, 2005
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mmmm peppermint and cocoa with the snow out side very nice i enjoyed reading this one

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  • Dec 25, 2005

cloud-sama

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The Dark Lord

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nice

This world shall burn in the fires of hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Jan 05, 2006

AC2N

AC2N

Assez de haine...

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hey hey hey...
nice to read, give some pleasure...
A great one !

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dezidez

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wow...very discriptive with this one Blk...it sounds and looks promising...I could actually imagine that...remanising about a peacieful nigth of winter...^_^ very nice indeed keep up the awsome job!

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  • Feb 05, 2006

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