ok....
lets talk about the original image...
it seems like there is light coming from more then one source...or mayb they made a mistake, but the light seems to be a
bit strong, just a BIT...
however...in ur image...there are a few mistakes...just a few..don't hate me :nya: ...
ok, first of all, i don't wanna sound like a pervert now, ok? but i do want to help u out pinpoint ur mistakes :)
...
her face....seems to be lacking...some parts of shades? if we assume the light coming from above her mostly...so...if u
made the shadowed parts a BIT darker, and the highlights a BIT brighter...like her chest for example...(again,
don't consider me a pervert, but i looked at every detail in it to tell u what's wrong)...
her chest, in the original image, u can tell that the color of it is the same as from her inner thighs...however in ur
image, it seems that her chest area is one colored...even though its supposed to be black AND blue...if u noticed what i
mean...OR...lookin at her right shoulder, in the original image, its bright, in urs, its dark...so u can add light to
that area mayb...and the chest area would still be black, but a bit lighter...i know her face probably convers a
bit...but for a female, the chest area really stands out (LOL again, not bein a pervert)!
ok, her left leg, i know this is hard, but havin a bit of shadow from her left arm (again, assuming the light is
strongly above her)...
i know i'm being a pain in the ***, your choice of colors is wonderful, however, if you consider changing the
"black" color, perhaps...switching your red and black colors? so her clothing would be red, and the outlines
would be black...this way, shadows and highlights would be much more obvious ^_^....
sorry for this constructive explanation....but if its about help....i really like to help, and if i'm involved in
something....i never let it get out of me if its not of best quality....in anything that is ;)
i hope that helped! weeooo! that was alot ^_^
bai bai for now!
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Leo
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