Valentines poem

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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You tell me that you love me
and all the things i do

that your heart isnt big enough
to hold all the love i have for you

You tell me that my hair is soft
and the perfume i wear unique

and as we share this special day
the love grows stronger not weak


kinda simple and oh so cheesy but hey its Valentine's Day
critique if you want

Happy Valetines to all and enjoy this little gift

cloud-sama

cloud-sama

The Dark Lord

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i like it it was good and thanks for the pointers on my poems i not that good with gramer its not my best subject :)

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  • Feb 14, 2006

zelious

zelious

Sleep is Gooood....

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Short but very cute ^^! Good job!

  • Feb 14, 2006

DoubleBarrel

DoubleBarrel

Banisher of Spam

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Wow such a great poem and it had alot of feeling in it too.^^ Keep up the excllent job.

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  • Feb 14, 2006
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Hehehe, poem gave me a nice warm feeling inside, nicely done!

  • Feb 15, 2006

AWOL

AWOL

"SING IT EASY!"

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It's sweet; not too cheesy. And I'm not kidding here.

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my critique:
there is no "cheese" on valentine ^_^
cute
made me smile, I thank U for that...
happy valentines to everyone!

  • Feb 15, 2006
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somewhat, as you said, slightly "cheesey" and ....that's my only complaint.

j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

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Oh great, I hate valentines day. Its a fake holiday thats was created on commercialism and unrealistic goals. Where I just couch out money for some overpriced crap that will be gone in a week.
Sorry if my bitterness is getting the best of me today, I just came back from a test that I bombed. I'm tired, sick, and a bunch of other stuff.

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  • Feb 15, 2006

Rikimaru-jp

Rikimaru-jp

Katon Karyu Endan

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How romantic :) great job B-lotus, I really like your valentine poem it's prertty good!
and lovely!
thanks alot for sharing it and happy valentine's day!
Ciao!

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royaldarkness

royaldarkness

Restless Soul

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pretty interesting. nice poem for valentine's day. but then i'm not a big fan of this day XD

sukumei

sukumei

Running A Critiquing Service

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yeah a bit simple but hey... you have done a very good job anyways

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  • Feb 15, 2006

KitClairvoyance

KitClairvoyance

The Secret Cookie Hoarder

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it's short, simple and sweet.. ^^ ..but then again i never really liked v-day.. >.> ...never got much from it apart from bad luck.. <.<

AC2N

AC2N

Assez de haine...

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it's so nice of you to share this one with us...
thanx a lot for this, and thanx for this nice nice moment...
love you so... ;)

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JadeTigress

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kawaii dorei

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ha very cheesy decent job though

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  • Feb 16, 2006

MysteryAngel

MysteryAngel

Kurai utsukushisa

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Awwwwwww this is a really sweet poem. It may be short but its still good. Good job!

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  • Feb 19, 2006
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I personally think there isn't true love between humans......
I don't know why I think that way but anyways I love the poem

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