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Abzuseilue

Abzuseilue

The Way Of Arts~Springs forever

i just make the new artwork for kira and freedom , i need to pose in minitokyo , but i scare it will be deleted , so i review here to let ppl comment it , so i can fully pose in minitokyo
http://img239.imageshack.us/my.php?image=rivivalof2at.jpg
new update ,correction
http://img387.imageshack.us/my.php?image=resurrection21ng.jpg
make the new text inside
http://img475.imageshack.us/my.php?image=resurrection25qj.jpg

Good and bad path just choosing by yourself,the future world will change with the path you choosen
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Well, try to use a different font for the text, because the one you used looks a bit n00b-ish... I recomment http://dafont.com or http://freefonts.com for cool fonts. Other than that, I don't see any problem with it... ;)

white-zero

white-zero

Left this part of the universe.

Man. How many scans you used for that one? XD

Neways, you must find a way to match Kira and Freedom. Their contrast and brightness clashed each other and that is always ain't good for the eyes. I think you should only use one render of Freedom. Having all three makes the wall too busy and that will clash with the icons on the desktop. The text. Well, other than your name (which should be at the bottom) you ought to remove them. It's for the better.

Sorry for the detailed comments, my friend. I happen to have loads of time rite now LOL.

I agree Odeena wat him say it. if i get cool fonts to match u artwork i P.M to u .

bluSake

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bluSake

A few things to consider:

* The chara extract is a bit rough. There's a white glow around his hair that you may want to clean up.

* A composition of multiple images of 1 chara (or, in this case, gundam) is considered a low effort way to fill space. Plus, it's distracting, and especially distracting from the chara. What I suggest instead is that you choose 1 of the gundam images and really build the wall around that one. Of course, that will require a bit more effort on the bg.

* The text. There's a too much of it and it's too plain. Using multiple lines of text like that can be heavy and bland, or an opportunity to be creative. For instance, this wall by crapmonster >> Echoes.

* A more minor thing is the border. I'm a bit wary of borders. The computer is a natural border, so adding one to the wall just cuts the image off.

Hope this helps. :)

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