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First time posting on Sandbox. Well, I would like to know what's your opinion/comments with my SDK wall feat. Yuya.
I made it not too long ago. I decided to post it here coz maybe I could gain some useful comments and advise from u :)
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So here's the wall:
The resolution is 1024x768
Yuya Shina
(Edited) Sorry for the mistakes :sweat:
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Photobucket must have resized the pic, because it looks quite small...
I really like it but I can't judge on such a small preview of the wall. The bg colors look good but i'd like a
better view.
OMG...it's a mistakes ...sorry to both of you.
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The scan you used seems to be rather low quality...especially obvious since the rest of your wall is very crisp...so
definitely find a higher quality version
An interesting idea for a tile background...I like the colors you used
However, it would be a good idea not to rely on so much text to fill the space...perhaps make the background more
interesting with a texture or expand on the color patterns you used
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The colors are great. I like the font you used for Yuya's names but I don't know about the one you used on the serie name. You may also want to shade the scan you used. Maybe play around with blending options, glaussian blurrs, color balance and brightness and contrast.
The BG is good, but I agree with cyd84, you shouldn't cover so much space with the font. Other than that, it looks good to me!
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well actually the 3D skill is quite nice ^__^, but there the wall is still empty i dont know why i have that feeling. then the lens flare effect you put in the bottom left isnt really good >__<, then there're really should be more effect can be put in this wall ^__^
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Scan is really low quality, looks like you resized it from a small image. I think the colours are a good match, I'm not liking some effects in the background or the weird font, you might want to try another font. But I think the major factor is the low quality of the scan, it's blurry, try using a better quality scan. Also, photobucket isn't good for uploading wallpapers, use Image Shack, they allow more space to upload an image. Keep working at it though.
Many thanks for your advise...actually i'm not really (meant) to put the letters on my wall except her name...but i also thinks that it didn't match with the bg... -_-'
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I like the 3D glass tile effect, very cool...though it looks a bit off with the chara. However, I think the problem here is that you tried to fill up too much space. Composition is just as much about using empty space as filling it in. Some pointers:
* There's too much text, and it's too big. Text gives structure, but too much of it can look clunky. What I suggest is that you erase 1 of the liness, preferably the "Samurai Deeper Kyo," since that's heavier.
* The butterflies look too...transparent. As such, they look like they were added to fill space, but were not well integrated into the scene. The bg is so 3D and realistic, why not try some more realistic brushes?
Hope this helps. :)
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oh, now i'm understand...i'm not actually expert in designing bg coz i just make it when it crossed my mind.
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Quote by yhakooI really like it but I can't judge on such a small preview of the wall. The bg colors look good but i'd like a better view.
Ah much better "saves as desktop" good work keep it up. :)
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