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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

Agony and pain
the feeling of being lost
washes over me
as i wake to a new day

with out you my life meant nothing
trying to move on
not sure where to go

wanting nothing more than to be with you
but knowing it can never be
not because we havent tried
but because of how scared we are of the out come

unsure of the future
we give up and walk away
from the only thing that we need

each other


life is a painful thing but it never has to get you down. if you love someone dont give up on them show them anyway you can...


critique if you must ... you know the drill :P

That was absolutely...
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XDE

XDE

Scanning XDE, CPA: Unknown

Great Poem, It's A Long Time Since I Haven't Been Seeing Ur Poems And I Gotta Say, U Improved Since The Last Time I Saw One Of Yer Poems, Great Job ^^

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cloud-sama

cloud-sama

The Dark Lord

nice i like it it relly makes me thank brovo *claps* :)

This world shall burn in the fires of hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Invincible

Invincible

Angel and Sierras Guardian

*Applaus* Nice song...as always.Hehe

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Never fight with the Invincible

Kelena

Kelena

Pulchritudinous Solitudinarian

Nice poem. I think there are several people who have gone through this type of situation. I'm no critic, but I really enjoyed this. I hope you keep writing. :)

WolfMaster

WolfMaster

The Hunter

very good painfull but good

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

a very good poem, 5/5 i give it. please make more, your poems are so good

hahhaa...tikichan's pic is fabulously hilarious :P
anyway..back to the poem..ahem :P
I'm really feeling 'unsure' on how to comment this..u portray it well :P

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j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

Nice poem, but I got the impression that you kinda wanted it to rhyme but just couldn't get it to work. Oh well.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

JadeTigress

JadeTigress

kawaii dorei

wow this is is good sis keep it up :)

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Ianervan

Ianervan

ToiletPriest

Wow... Good poem. Nice that you started making poems again. ;)

wolfling

wolfling

otonashii okami

this is sad... very sad indeed.


good job and glad that your writing again

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Thanx to my friend AC2N for the nice nice av as well cute userpage... *kiss and hugs*

Shoku

Shoku

Looking for past friends

is doubt a better word replacement for unsure?

but do as you wish

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