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Nighteyes

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An Akira wallpaper I've been making for about 3 days.

I'd like to see some ideas on improvements/corrections before uploading it :)

http://img112.imageshack.us/img112/1289/testsuowall4lo.th.jpg

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kuroimisa

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kuroimisa

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This is done pretty well. The only things I could suggest is having the character less orange (blend it a bit more, so it's a bit darker and melts into the background a little more) and the text on the wall should have some perspective (the O should be larger than the I AM part :))

Apart from that, there's nothing else :)

PS: If you darken the scan a bit, leave the eyes glinting red if you can. I think the effect should look quite nice in the end :)

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I'd also suggest using the burn tool around Tetsuo's edges so they blend in with the stock you used, especially the hair part. Other than that check everything for quality details and it should be fine~

I think them this very thin one and the bottom could be shadier

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