Heart of Glass [POEM]

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BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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those few words was all it took
to shatter this heart of glass
" I like you as a friend" you said
feeling my heart fall apart

bending to pick up the pieces
I try to figure out what I said or did
I showed nothing but love and kindness
and I find myself bleeding
as the slivers dig into my fingers

you created a void
painful and empty
unsure if I will recover
I turn my back on love
never to look back again

critique if you want
yes i know i have done alot of sad ones as of late but they are done for a reason...

WolfMaster

WolfMaster

The Hunter

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very well done, painfull but well done

  • Apr 18, 2006

animefreak3

animefreak3

Serpentarius

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""I like you as a friend" you said...unsure if I will recover"

it upsets me that people feel this way...

We begin and end in nothingness. Our darkness is confronting our ultimate nature, for nothing can come from nothing. We must sow the wind and reap the void, since the now is all we have. Together, we walk in darkness.

  • Apr 19, 2006
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A very true poem indeed that captures the heartless actions of others and the affects on those they don't intend to hurt.

JadeTigress

JadeTigress

kawaii dorei

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wow sis amazing..sad and ihope it isnt for you .......or about you.....

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  • Apr 19, 2006

wolfling

wolfling

otonashii okami

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to sad BlkLotus too sad. you did good. i hope this wasnt done to you

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Thanx to my friend AC2N for the nice nice av as well cute userpage... *kiss and hugs*

  • Apr 20, 2006

j0n0

j0n0

Increadibly Cute

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Have you ever thought about going to the bar? There would be a lot of guys who would want you.
I know, i know, that doesn't mean you would want them. But, just think of the enyoyment you'll get from rejecting so many guys.
It really should help. Not only will you feel like guys want you, but realize your own "rejection powers."

I apoligies to all the guys that might have been rejected due to this statement. Me so sorry.

An eye for an eye brings justice, but it is compassion that changes a man.

Another point of view doesn't necessarily make yours more or less right.

  • Apr 21, 2006

Kelena

Kelena

Pulchritudinous Solitudinarian

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So sad... It's the worst being rejected isn't it? You said your sad poems are for a reason. Hopefully things aren't going too bad. Well, I like you poem anyway. :)

  • Apr 21, 2006

animefreak3

animefreak3

Serpentarius

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It's sad that people feel the need to "reject" the interest of others to feel good about themselves. The selfishness of it makes my heart ache.

We begin and end in nothingness. Our darkness is confronting our ultimate nature, for nothing can come from nothing. We must sow the wind and reap the void, since the now is all we have. Together, we walk in darkness.

  • Apr 22, 2006

cloud-sama

cloud-sama

The Dark Lord

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wonderfull poem kind of sad what am i saing it is sad owell nice *clap*

This world shall burn in the fires of hell!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Apr 24, 2006
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Is this like: if some body asked out a person, the person being asked says "NO" in your face?

"I'm not lonely. Cuz I'm always alone".

  • Apr 24, 2006

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