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KOKUJINDESU

KOKUJINDESU

TYRONE-KUN

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Well...
I can submit doujins all day but can't get a wallpaper made that isn't instantly axed so any CONSTRUCTIVE comments are welcome.
I just love this pic so I wanted to..well...you know...help.
http://i42.photobucket.com/albums/e318/KOKUJINDESU/DL1.jpg

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Kane773

Kane773

Nod Commander

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1. Get rid of the repeating Elbow and butt on the right side.
2. Make the background more consistent.
3. Ummm, it seems parts of her are dissappearing.
4. I could be wrong, but your image also looks corrupted.

  • May 06, 2006

soujiokita

soujiokita

Super Kawaii

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I think you should try putting some more color into the backgrounf. It just looks kidna plain and boring.

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bluSake

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The ghosting really isn't adding to the composition, so removing it is a start.

The bg also looks low quality: lots of noise and jagged edges. It looks like you're going for a sky scene, so what I suggest is that you start with a sky stock photo. Of course, just pasting the chara image on a stock photo isn't going to be enough either. From there you can add mist, brushing, texturing, etc. to create a more cohesive bg.

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Kuzoku

Kuzoku

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The background needs to be soft to match with the character. Try some nice fluffy clouds in the back and softer colours that the black? ^_^* Good luck!

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