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Never Look Back

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i'd really apreciate some advice... just to know if this is ok or if i should change or add a few things before submitting it :)

thank you for your help!

http://img259.imageshack.us/img259/2259/bubblegumcopy0ju.th.jpg

Hmm, I think the words should be faded a little more, and not red. It doesn't blend with the girl+bg.

Isn't life great when you're MALEVOLENT

http://img340.imageshack.us/img340/3370/neverlookbackcopy6zh.th.jpg

is this better?

sailorchiron

sailorchiron

Memories of Eliteness

The only thing I don't like is the text. It might be better if it was just barely visible. Other than that, it's a very nice wall.

Ripping walls? You're headed to Banned-ville.
Signature Image

http://img177.imageshack.us/img177/8624/neverlookbackcopy8gg.th.jpg

how's this then?
or i also did this:

http://img204.imageshack.us/img204/8560/neverlookbackcopy2vn.th.jpg

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

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I like the first text in the image of "Original art by Range..." - the dithering is nice, but in the next 2 images, it looks less smooth and clean...

I'm assuming you made the horizontal streaks across the background of flying birds to symbolize their movement, IMO it doesn't really have to be there... overall, it looks like you made this wall out of sadness, the blue background and "never look back" message tells me that. What made you make this wallie anyway? Ohh, and I love Range Murata's works ^_^

Very nice Morphee...

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aw thanks :)
well maybe not exactly sadness... but more frustration... (i got dumped last week by my boyfriend... well... ex-boyfriend now)

i'll put the dithering back :)

which one is better?
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2544/neverlookbackcopy2ks.th.jpg http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8513/neverlookbackcopy24bi.th.jpg

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

Quote by Morphee
which one is better?
http://img230.imageshack.us/img230/2544/neverlookbackcopy2ks.th.jpg http://img232.imageshack.us/img232/8513/neverlookbackcopy24bi.th.jpg

i like the words in the second one and the bg in the first one... to me the bg matches a bit better and flows..

ok... i'll submit the first on then with just the title :)

thanks for your help!

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