*poem* Rotting me away...

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Inuyasha-FAN

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I'm back

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Everyday i walk passed you I feel so good inside.
You used to talk to me all the time.
Then someone turned the tide.
Now you dont want to talk to me and never want to go pass, allways with a mad mood when you look at me.
I feel empty ever so lonely.
My heart is broken.
I lock myself in my room crying constantly.
Even if i hid it, its still rotting me away...


This is a poem i wrote when it was a hard time for me. I hope you all like it.

-Inuyasha-FAN

  • May 24, 2006

bobobob

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wandering

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thats such a sad but yet good poem. welll done

  • May 24, 2006

Zero-Ultimate

Zero-Ultimate

Strike Freedom

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nice poem, it's very depressing but i like it

Sit upon the frozen heavens
DAI GUREN HYOURINMARU
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  • May 24, 2006

Asigha

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Welcome To The Club

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good poem it describes feelings of a lost love. good job.

...i will rise again...
{~}In Trance We Trust{~}
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Inuyasha-FAN

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Thanks Everyone! :D That means a lot to me.

  • May 25, 2006

AngelTAP

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You put alot of emotion into it. Very nice.

When Injustice Becomes Law, Rebellion Becomes Duty

  • May 25, 2006

lacusxxclyne

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~JUst SmilE & Ill BE FinE~

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did you really was ditch like that?

  • May 25, 2006

Inuyasha-FAN

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... If your asking me if that happened..... Yes. it did...

  • May 26, 2006

wolfling

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otonashii okami

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its very good....very sad

( a few grammer errors)

over all i like it you did good keep up the good work

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Thanx to my friend AC2N for the nice nice av as well cute userpage... *kiss and hugs*

  • May 30, 2006

xange

xange

~white bunny~

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thanks for sharing

she'll **** you just for the taste


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  • May 30, 2006

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