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CLAMPchic

CLAMPchic

I'm just me

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New poem! I actually wrote it during the school year sometime, though I'm not sure when, but found it within the last few weeks.

It's very simplistic, but that's one of the things I find appealing about it, surprisingly enough. No rhyme scheme, no intentional meter, no particular structure...just my inner thoughts put into words on a page (or screen, in this case). Enjoy~

Gone

If I close my eyes,
Will I disappear?
If I hide away,
Will you forget?
Darkness covers
And I am saved...

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"If you always do what you've always done, you'll always be what you've always been." ~ Anonymous

  • Jun 03, 2006

Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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It's good, but short! Thanks for sharing it with us :)

  • Jun 03, 2006

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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yes its short and yes its good. i have felt that way before...

keep it up and post more :)

Shoku

Shoku

Looking for past friends

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fairly good...is the last part meant to umm contradict the top two parts?

jasaiyajin

jasaiyajin

-repeat-

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sounds really close to an epitaph...

your words sound really religious... ^_^

-repeat-

  • Jun 03, 2006

SweetGrl

SweetGrl

doki doki

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Wow...such a deep wonderful short poem! Is it kinda like a haiku? It's very good! ^_~

Live to Love, Love to Live~~
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  • Jun 09, 2006

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