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New poem! I actually wrote it during the school year sometime, though I'm not sure when, but found it within the last few weeks.
It's very simplistic, but that's one of the things I find appealing about it, surprisingly enough. No rhyme scheme, no intentional meter, no particular structure...just my inner thoughts put into words on a page (or screen, in this case). Enjoy~
Gone
If I close my eyes,
Will I disappear?
If I hide away,
Will you forget?
Darkness covers
And I am saved...
"If you always do what you've always done, you'll always be what you've always been." ~
Anonymous
It's good, but short! Thanks for sharing it with us :)
yes its short and yes its good. i have felt that way before...
keep it up and post more :)
fairly good...is the last part meant to umm contradict the top two parts?
sounds really close to an epitaph...
your words sound really religious... ^_^
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Wow...such a deep wonderful short poem! Is it kinda like a haiku? It's very good! ^_~
Live to Love, Love to Live~~
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