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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

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A boy and a girl,
the best of friends.
From elementary to high school
from beginning to end.

Through all those years
their friendship grew.
They both felt the same,
but neither knew.

Each waking moment
since the day they met.
They both loved each other
sunrise to sunset.

He was all she had
in her terrible life.
He was the one who kept her
from using her knife.

She was his angel,
she made him smile.
Though life threw him curves,
she made it all worth while.

Then one day
things went terribly wrong.
The next few weeks
were like a very sad song.

He made her jealous
on purpose he tried.
When the girl asked, "Do you love her?"
on purpose he lied.

He played with jealousy
like it was a game.
Little did he know
Things would never be the same.

His plan was working
but he had no clue.
How wrong things would go,
the damage he would do.

One night she broke down,
feeling very alone.
Just her and the blade,
no one else home.

She dialed his number,
"Hello"
She told him she loved him
and hung up the phone.

He raced to her house
just a minute too late.
Found her lying in blood,
her heart had no rate.

Beside her was a note,
in it her confession.
Her love for this boy,
her only obsession.

As he read the note,
he knelt down and cried.
Grabbed her knife,
that night they both died.

She was found in his arms,
both of them dead.
Under her note
his handwriting said:
"I loved her so,
and she never knew.
All this time I loved
her too."

A friend of mine made this, she said it was ok if i submited it here. I hope you all like it.

  • Jun 09, 2006

lunagata

lunagata

Lurking -3-

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WOW!

NICE POEM!
Dark. Powerful!
MAN THAT IS LIKE WOW!
*lol*

Tell your friend I loved it!
And I'm picky with poem, but this one,
this one is WOW!
*lol*

Awsome!
Someone should make a song about it!
*whispers* I bet Rammstein would make a song like this *lol*

*lol*

anyways!
BRAVO!
~lunagata~

Inuyasha-FAN

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I told her! Haha she said "Thanks!"

  • Jun 10, 2006

bobobob

bobobob

wandering

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wow that is so sad, its a great poem but its very sad.

  • Jun 10, 2006

Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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Thank you! :)

  • Jun 10, 2006
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Aww, I almost cried, very good poem.

  • Jun 10, 2006
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O.o thats a great poem :) lol i dont know what else to say :o

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Wow, this poem is like a sad story. Really touching.
This poem shows both romance and tragedy.
Whoever made this poem gets 5 stars from me.
Talk to ya later inu-FAN,
~Richard~

  • Jun 13, 2006

Shortypants

Shortypants

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They should make it into a song or something, But realy it wuz good.

  • Jun 13, 2006

wolfling

wolfling

otonashii okami

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wow absolutely amazing... tell your friend to keep up the awesome work :)

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Thanx to my friend AC2N for the nice nice av as well cute userpage... *kiss and hugs*

  • Jun 14, 2006

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