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A short poem I wrote in my free time. I hope you like it.
~What is love?~
Love is a deep feeling in which two people share,
And that feeling brings them together forever.
It is a feelng most can not explain or identify,
It is a feeling most lock within their heart,
Only to be released when the person they are destined to be with shows affection to them.
Love can be explained in thousands of ways,
In many perspectives,
Each one is true.
wow i really like it, it was nice ^_^
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A little mushy coming from inuyasha but overall pretty good.
Goodjob :) It's really good! Very good! :)
~Inuyasha-FAN
Heh, this is quite good, Richard.
The aspects and the views of how we, humans, look at love as something from the heart is, well, correct to some of us.
Alas, Richard, this poem overall is excellent. I'm pretty sure that your loved one will enjoy this poem and
I'm sure that she is the one that gave you the feeling to write this short poem. Once again, Richard, outstanding
work. ^^
befor i say anyting i love ur poem and hade to make my own
Love is...
Love is a feeling that is so sweet
Love is a feeling that you cannot beat
Love is a feeling that you feel deep
Love is...
Love is a challenge you have to face
Love is an emotion you must embrace
Love is a topic that stays on your case
Love is...
Love is an issue that cannot be ignored
Love is around when things get bored
Love is like a bird ready to soar
Love is...
Love is around when times get bad
Love is there when you get sad
Love is really all you ever had
Love is...
Love is me and love is you
Love is made not by one but by two
Love is the feeling felt by you
Love is...
Wow that poem rocked! I think that is the sweetest poem i have read in the longest time (basically because i haven't been reading very often anymore) but other than that It is GREAT! Keep it up!
Very good job.
My your light and dark Ka form the perfect BA.
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That's really pretty. You must write a good bit of things like that. ^^ You have a nack for it. :)
I love love, so this love poem is very lovely! xD
Live to Love, Love to Live~~
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