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Quick poem I thought of, Enjoy~
You left me,
your gone now
still waiting I am
for your return
but your not coming
I wait for you standing
in the cold rain
just waiting
to see your
beautiful face
once more
all day long
all night long
waiting for your
Return
I hope you all liked it.
wow! That sounds good ^-^ i like it , that should be a song ^-^ u should be a song writer
nice! i wish i could write good poems1 i suck though :P
Woaho.....not bad ;)
very good my friend very good
Anouther good, yet sad, poem. Keep up the hard work Nick.
Your friend,
~Richard~
Not your best but still good
hahaha! I know, thanks for your honest opinion.
hmmmm,i thought i might've been a little on the short side,not in talent,i mean i n length
don't say what you think i am
great as always
dont cut off your own arm just to spite me
sig frm saku
I think it's great ^^ As always I'll be here waiting for more of your excellent poems. Keep up the good work!
merged: 07-11-2006 ~ 07:43am
I bet the person it's about really appreciates it!~!~!~! See you around Nick!~!~!~!
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