*poem* Return

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Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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Quick poem I thought of, Enjoy~

You left me,
your gone now
still waiting I am
for your return
but your not coming
I wait for you standing
in the cold rain
just waiting
to see your
beautiful face
once more
all day long
all night long
waiting for your
Return

I hope you all liked it.

  • Jun 27, 2006

Ilovelucky

Ilovelucky

~forgotten pain~

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wow! That sounds good ^-^ i like it , that should be a song ^-^ u should be a song writer

  • Jun 27, 2006
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nice! i wish i could write good poems1 i suck though :P

  • Jun 27, 2006
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Woaho.....not bad ;)

  • Jun 27, 2006

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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very good my friend very good

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Anouther good, yet sad, poem. Keep up the hard work Nick.

Your friend,
~Richard~

  • Jun 27, 2006

Shortypants

Shortypants

I'm bad

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Not your best but still good

  • Jun 27, 2006

Inuyasha-FAN

Inuyasha-FAN

I'm back

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hahaha! I know, thanks for your honest opinion.

  • Jun 27, 2006

sageOfEarth

sageOfEarth

Mars Star Power!!!!

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hmmmm,i thought i might've been a little on the short side,not in talent,i mean i n length

don't say what you think i am

  • Jun 28, 2006

Ryoki-san

Ryoki-san

multum in parvo-ore no ichiru

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great as always

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dont cut off your own arm just to spite me
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  • Jul 01, 2006
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I think it's great ^^ As always I'll be here waiting for more of your excellent poems. Keep up the good work!

merged: 07-11-2006 ~ 07:43am
I bet the person it's about really appreciates it!~!~!~! See you around Nick!~!~!~!

  • Jul 06, 2006

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