lacusxxclyne

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~JUst SmilE & Ill BE FinE~

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hehe heres a poem =D

well is not that perfect just hope you guys like =D


Friends are the flowers in the garden of life,
They help you through times of trouble and strife.


There's nothing like friends to make a heart sing,
True friends will share with you most everything.


They will not abandon you in times of need,
They aren't overcome by envy or greed.


Friends are the icing on life's great big cake,
Real friends will give and allow you to take.


I don't know how I would survive without friends,
They applaud my beginnings and mourn my sad ends

I drifted into an unknown world
Of peace, spirit, and whisper
Darkness shrouded all around
Then the view became crisper

I was staring at great big sky
Enveloped in black and stars
Listening to a pumping beat
With musical notes strummed on guitars

A light cool breeze swept on by
On this amazing summer night
Calming all of my tense nerves
That were still rocketing from the fight

You can hear all of the voices
Of cheerfulness and fun
The girls huddle close sharing secrets
And the guys race and run

Other friends are nearby
Singing and dancing at the party
Being the wild teens they were
Making this night even more hearty

And my best friend sitting
Right next to her first lover
He clasps her hand gently
And puts an arm around her

In the center of us all
Was a great big fire
Displaying all its red-orange flames
And the warmth we desire

The tastes, the feels
The smells, the faces
All the hurt and kill in me
Disappears - this all replaces

And in the black star sky
A giant sound greats a glow
Then sparkling down with crackles
Are all the colors of the fire work show

Soon I'm exhausted
So tired and so slow
I felt so weakened inside
But I didn't want to go

I headed inside for just a moment
To rest my heavy eyes
I close and listen to everything
To the voices outside; the happy cries

I hear someone else come in
I had expected it to be a friend
To come chase me back outside
And say I still had fun to spend

But then when I opened my eyes
I was looking upon another face
Of the one I loved; him
In this dark, quiet place

He crouched beside me speaking
But I couldn't understand what he said
Soon I felt yanked away
And I heard the sounds of fear ahead

All of the visions of my past
Came right before my eyes
The screaming and the yelling
The shedded tears from my eyes

The scars appeared on my skin
I was looking at my own self
I was so scared watching the blood
Leak out all by itself

I awoke with a jolt
And found myself awake on my bed
A song soon played on the radio
One that filled me with dread

What hurts the most
Was being so close
And having so much to say
And watching you walk away
And never knowing
What could have been
And not seeing that loving you
Is what I was trying to do

I wished to change the past
And that morning I cried
Remembering what will never be
Knowing all hopes are fried

merged: 07-05-2006 ~ 05:31pm
oh its abit long i know =D

orpheuz

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I shall return

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hmmm, is the friendship broken in the end? It's a bit sad :( but good one though :D.

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lacusxxclyne

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haha i might think of making a fan fiction too =D

RaiMinakami

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Silent Guardian

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Oohh, nice one! ^_^

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95Elizabeth

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.:Breathe:.

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Yeah its like me my friendship always gets broken . I'm used to it . But great .

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norine07

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wow long one, nice your real good at it haha..! ^^ ja-ne..! ^^

*sakura-chan*

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rorenzu

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Mio Amakura

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huh!
hmm,,hmm,, too long,, your poem got mixed up,,
but
i didn't know your poetic!
your so good!
sugoi!
keep it up!friend

Together...forever...
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wow! that was rlly good! i rlly liked it...but at 1st i thought the beggining the 2-line stanzas was 1 seperate poem. i thnk that and the 4-line- stanza one canbe seperte poems. but other than that, i rlly liked it!

lacusxxclyne

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~JUst SmilE & Ill BE FinE~

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well the first 5 paragraph was just a warming up to story poem that i wrote =D

sprt of like an intro =D
glad you like it =]

Tenko-san

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The Destiny Warrior

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Haha, this poem is heaps good. I actually enjoyed it, not like school poems that we learn... Blargh! But besides that, it's really good and good job. Good luck with your fanfiction, if you're going to make one.

Bye for now,

Tenko. =3

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