^_^' I'm new to the poetry catigory so please don't make fun of me.
My Sweet Angel
You think that I'm too nice
I really don't think that's true
You say that I'm too sweet
I say no one's sweeter than you
I say I'd never leave you
You hardly believe me
I say your my angel
And only you can set me free
No matter what you say
In your heart you know it's true
To me no one in the world
Is greater than you
I know it's kinda short, but I hope you all like.
hehe you have an idea there but actually you should try rhyming words it would make the poem sound nicer =D
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?~?~? I did rhyme! I made the poem where the second and last line in each paragraph rhyme!
oh i meant make it rhyme more ^_^
well actually the rhyming words is not that profound so its kinda abit bland oh and your other poem is much better and
you did a geat job on it =D
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Thanks... oh why do I suck so much? I'll keep working at it and hopefully get better though ^_^
It does rhyme.. it's great! It's in a rhyme scheme ABCB format... good job! love it! ^^ Ashlee I think you're good! You don't suck... x_x''
I love it great poem! :D
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very good work, poem is something that comes from the heart not the mind. when do ing a poem for to see you are showing them your heart. very very good
wow....that is sooo good , i wish that i could say that to the one i love .....hay maybe i should make poems and make them into songa of my past ....cool! thanx lilwolfmaiden u brighten my day ^_^
Wow! Nice job!
Bah! To make a poem, that dont needs to make a rhyme.(sorry for my bad english^^).When we white, we do what is in your
heart..The grammaire is the last thing we think...
Is very good as the last one ...^^.Kisses...
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a poem doesn't have 2 rhyme in order 2 be a great poem.
nice job, lilwolfmaiden.
It's very touching.I think you should start a serious career on poems.
another beautiful poem ^.^ you really should be a poet
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Incredible poem!
good one^^
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