lilwolfmaiden

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To me this poem means that everyone can mistake their feelings so ask yourself some questions before you assume things, but that doesn't mean your feeling aren't true. This poem took me a litlle longer than the others, I hope you all enjoy!

A Love Mistake

I tried to stay away from love
So my heart would never break
But I started to get some feelings
A bond was starting to make

I tried to deny the truth
But I could deny it no longer
I knew I loved you
And accepting made me stronger

I wanted to tell you
But shyness didn't let me
I tried to tell you
But my feelings upset me

I knew I needed to tell you
So I gave it one last go
I knew that it was something
That you needed to know

When I finally got the guts
To tell you how I feel
I knew at long last
That our love was real

You said nothing at first
I started to get scared
Suddenly I felt
I was being compared

I cried in the night
All alone once more
Doing nothing but crying
Until there was a knock on the door

I wiped my wet eyes
I opened the door and saw you outside
You told me you didn't share the same feelings
I said neither do I and lied

But after you left
My heart didn't break
I realized
You were a mistake

I didn't truly feel
The way I thought I did
And love is something
With which you shouldn't kid

So I go on avoiding love
So my heart won't break
And so I won't fall in love
With another mistake

Inversion988

Inversion988

upholdin' the nonsense.

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a long one, but a good one. how do u come up with these so quick? seems like it took forever. anyway, nice poem, lilwolfmaiden.

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Expert at making poems. Greatjob.

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foreverforgotten

foreverforgotten

Sentimental Daydreamer...

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Sad, but nice, and it's true what you said =) I made a mistake too before.. ah well.

Ilovelucky

Ilovelucky

~forgotten pain~

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awww,....sad....then beatiful.......but this remeinds me of my relastionship with my ex-boyfriend....................wwwwwwwwwhh(...)

WolfMaster

WolfMaster

The Hunter

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I have felt just what you speak of but I have found real love do not close your heart to it or you will miss it. it will be painful at times but when the right one comes it will all be worth the pain trust Me

BlkLotus

BlkLotus

bara tsukiyo

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that was beautifully written.. i felt the emotion behind this one.
i wish i could fav this one because i would in a heart beat

vatican92

vatican92

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Very nice poem but I don't like poems that rhyme.... for some weird reason

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Good job! As the other ones you made^^.Remenber my ex- boyfriend...
In your life we making mistakes ...life is bad is true ...but is like the other said ..." god close a door but open a window"( i think is so).
Well take care and i big "hug"...^_~.

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Perfect poem lilwolfmaiden.

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