well i spent about 8 hours on it
while i was vectoring and preparing all the items and efects of this one
first i was thinking in made just a vector but them i mixed another things
and put it in a walli format
now i don't know in good enought to be submmited as a wallie or
if i just submmit it as a vector...
so i'm asking some help to decide...
here is the item:
and the link for the large image
well since you added extras to it its a wallpaper, and essentially is a wallpaper
Your "large image" link does not work, but from what I can see in the small thumbnail you posted it does not appear to be a vector. As a wallpaper it's got a lot of work to be done, it looks as though you placed a scan in the center and just surrounded it with some brushes. You need to extract your character and build a background that works with it, not just place effects around a scan. I would probably wait for some more experience wallers to give you a hand, as I'm not the best at it myself.
it's more of a wallpaper the way you have it, because it's got brushes and filter effects on it. If you want to submit it as a vector though, get rid of the background, and you probably want the whole image (ie without the blurring edge effects)
but as a wallpaper, like fluke said, it still needs some work. I find those four big swirls in the corners rather distracting. But the link to your large image doesn't work for me either, so why don't you upload it on to imageshack so we can get a better look at it?
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ok i'll do it now
thanks for the replies ^_^
merged: 08-28-2006 ~ 08:52pm
so here is
even better that it was ^_^ , they're goinna love it !
Hmmmm I'm assuming when you mean vector, you redid some of the lines? ^_^'
The wallpaper you have posted has a scan that doesn't have great quality. The lines are inconsistent (break up and then start again, and are of different thicknesses. Especially around the shirt collar, the lines are really fragmented and don't look high quality.
I would have to agree that the border brushes are far too strong in colour and overwhelming in size. Borders are really hard to use actually, and at the moment don't really serve much of a purpose at this point.
Perhaps if you turned the scan into a "photo" in a photoframe with these kind of borders with a wood texture it could work a bit better.
The text is also a bit too big- and always try to keep text in the one location- I would put it at the bottom of the wallpaper (where Devil Smile is), because I think you want people to see the image first and then read the "caption" :) That way the text won't dominate the wall.
If you try the photoframe idea, you can then do some other things like create a table or a base for the photo frame, create a sense of depth or perspective (as you're seeing the top of the table) and create a wall behind (wallpaper would be easy- download a texture or pattern online :P)
Overall it's up to your imagination :) But the things you'll need to keep in mind is that the scan is rather "floaty" and the hair and body should have been kept if you chose to go ahead with the current background you have now :) You may also have to reconsider the background to fit a particular concept you wish to demonstrate with this scan ^^
I hope that was of some help!
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Great work! ^^
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