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Mnemeth

Mnemeth

Rider of the Currents

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Suggestions for a good title are welcome


Into the darkness
and out of the light
It charges on
dragging all in sight

As the colors
one by one
fade from memory
like the sun

Further and further
into the deep
Chasing the fiends
that haunt our sleep

Now black is all
that is left
An absence of light
leaves all bereft

Until a single
sound is heard
maybe a breath
or maybe some words

Louder and louder
the sound becomes
until it fills all
like the beating of drums

Never give up
and never give in
until the fight
reaches its end

If you stop
its into the pit
But you never lose
unless you quit

Hope some people get some enjoyment out of this.

Do not interfere in the affairs of dragons, for you are crunchy and good with ketchup.

  • Aug 30, 2006

UberDog

UberDog

Infinite Wubz...

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A good title could be "Perseverance".

I like it. It has that dark yet uplifting feel to it.

Knowledge and Time are the Keys to Wisdom.Signature Image

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